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1_level_meaner

A work of literary genius

Jul 05, 2006 00:17

Title: The Deal of a Lifetime!
Author: Hitachiin Hikaru
Rating: Woot!!!
Pairing: The only one that works!

( The Deal of a Lifetime )

Comments 62

princeofwriting July 5 2006, 12:36:24 UTC

That sounds kind of unrealistic to me - I think the princess would have been better off staying single. Plus the writing left much to be desired, to say the least.

shoujou_hosuto July 5 2006, 16:35:06 UTC

She is definitely better off staying single.

1_level_meaner July 6 2006, 17:45:42 UTC

HARUHI~! You missed like, the entire point of the story. *weeps* The princess is in love with the twin princes. She lived HAPPILY ever after because she'd made the RIGHT CHOICE, which is good because none of the other nobles/princes were even close to being a good match for her!

1_level_meaner July 6 2006, 17:42:46 UTC

First of all, LJ is for fun and amusement, not seriousness and nit picking.

Second of all, I am fourth in my class at the most prestigous high school in Japan. If I felt like it I could write a perfectly serious story with no sense of humor to be read by sourpusses like you. Any requests? *challenges you*

Third of all, I'll bet you're a dumb commoner.

luuuucky July 5 2006, 13:37:46 UTC

Wow, there's been a lot of princess/prince fanfiction lately, hasn't there?

Only thing I'd change is using less parentheses. If you have an idea, just write it out! Who needs sidenotes?

1_level_meaner July 6 2006, 17:33:12 UTC

Actually, I agree. People should just say whatever they think. Woot. You're a sharp guy.

1_level_nicer July 7 2006, 10:56:47 UTC

People should just say whatever they think.

Remember that that gets you into trouble, Hikaru.

1_level_meaner July 8 2006, 01:23:59 UTC

*blush* Kaoru! Why did you say that on lj? ;_;

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shoujou_hosuto July 5 2006, 16:41:27 UTC

A two for one deal, Hikaru? Just how cheap do you think "commoners" are? >.>

1_level_meaner July 6 2006, 17:35:42 UTC

Not cheap. It was like... an added bonus to the fact that there was not just ONE glorious awesome prince, but TWO! Its like, instead of having one piece of cake pizza, having a humongous slice of goodness!

Anyways, Haruhi... I'm sad you didn't like it. ;_;

shoujou_hosuto July 6 2006, 18:20:31 UTC

Hikaru... I don't think you can really compare people and cake pizza. >.>

Well... I'm sure if you wrote another story that wasn't obviously about the host club I would enjoy it a lot more ^_^;

1_level_meaner July 6 2006, 22:39:01 UTC

W-w-what? *blush* Of course its not about the host club!!! Why would I write something like that? Obviously no one listened to a word I said when I told you it had no correlation to real life. How could you even think that? I even told you ahead of time just so you weren't confused by the fact that there are twins in the story. >.>

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ichaicha_rakuen July 6 2006, 11:05:25 UTC

Hello.

Your younger brother sent me here.

I hear you're into twincest.

1_level_meaner July 6 2006, 17:36:45 UTC

Yo.

Oh, you talked to Kaoru?

What has he been telling you? He's usually shy.

ichaicha_rakuen July 7 2006, 00:07:18 UTC

Yeah, I did...

He commented on my... unusual choice of books and then asked if he was into twincest.

He told me to go to you. Because you're the seme. That kind of implies you're screwing.

Pleased to meet you. xD

1_level_meaner July 8 2006, 01:27:26 UTC

I'm only mostly seme... Uhh... may I ask why you're interested?

Ahh... yoroshiku ne.

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ouran_ousama July 6 2006, 17:12:04 UTC

T-this is ridiculous! I'LL NEVER LET YOU NEAR MY DAUGHTER AGAIN!!!!

(ooc: haha...about how I haven't been on brawl for a while...sooorrries...=^ . ^;=)

1_level_meaner July 6 2006, 17:38:41 UTC

WHAAAAAAT?!

DIDN'T I TELL YOU BEFORE YOU READ IT THAT THIS STORY HAS NO RELEVANCE TO REAL LIFE AT ALL WHATSOEVER?!

This has absolutely nothing to do with you at all! *pout* >.>

ouran_ousama July 6 2006, 17:43:16 UTC

YOU HEARD ME!!! *flails* PERVERT! MOLESTOR! BROTHER COMPLEX!

*clears throat* Although I am glad to see you expressing yourself and attempting to socialize with other people...it has become clear to me that your imagination is somewhat warped...

1_level_meaner July 6 2006, 22:59:14 UTC

First of all, you can call me a pervert if you really want to, but wasn't it you that Haruhi called a pervert? She's never called me that, because it would be totally unwarranted.

Second of all, why did you call me a molestor? That doesn't make sense. I've never molested anyone. But I'm sure you have! Like the time we found you in a dark room with Haruhi blindfolded!!!

Third of all, you would have a brother complex too if your brother was the coolest person on the planet. Too bad for you.

Fourth of all, Tono, my imagination dulls in comparison to your great mind theater.

Last of all, thanks, I am enjoying self-expression very much. *grin*

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