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Nov 29, 2006 22:02

How arrogant lust must be
to show its curvy fangs so boldly
before the lemon jello mold of love
has even had time to settle.

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hear_the_colors December 1 2006, 01:52:29 UTC
this poem incorporates many literary devices, including an interesting choice of dicktion and metaphysical cumceit

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1eprechaun December 1 2006, 03:57:43 UTC
haha oh man.
11 WHATNOTS LAST CLASS. aaahghghgh

My favorite part was how I spent my entire presentation thinking about the really cute guy from Scrubs, and concentrating on not scratching my foot cuz it reeeeaally itched.
I don't even know what I said.

syntass, dicktion, metaPHYSICAl cum-seat,
extended metawhore, alubesion
Man, we use so many good literary sperms.

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