Hope's Edge Scene 2

Dec 03, 2007 04:53

With pleasure: ( Hope's Edge Scene 2 )

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scratch_ar March 13 2008, 00:47:22 UTC
From all of this, a thought solidified amid the discourteously loud feathers: Last time this happened, I woke up part Cylon.

Bang. I love the impact of this sentence.

You definitely have me intrigued and your medical background lends a visceral reality to sick!laura, I love it!

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HE 1littlebird March 13 2008, 04:44:29 UTC
I'm glad you commented on that paragraph, because I worried about my language play being too much for my audience but went for it anyway. I'm SO thrilled to have another reader! Especially one that thinks!

I looked for Apperception (was that the title you gave me?) but I couldn't find it on SI, could you point me in that direction? I also did some reading on SI before bed, but got sleepy. ;)

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Re: HE scratch_ar March 13 2008, 06:55:41 UTC
Sry, Apperception was on my lj lol

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