Family Matters Chapter 2

Oct 18, 2009 07:49

 
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family matters

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ratul October 18 2009, 14:08:26 UTC
Nice!!!!`` but a lil too short. Would have loved a long chapter.

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1on31y24 October 18 2009, 18:58:07 UTC
Thank you very much for your comments. Sorry about the length of the chapter, I wrote it very late at night right before I went to sleep so I didn't notice the length. I'm glad it turned out well, please continue reading...:D

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5123 October 18 2009, 18:03:22 UTC
wow i almost cryed!!! what are you trying to do kill me? brack my heart? update soon!!!

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1on31y24 October 18 2009, 18:56:50 UTC
Eekkk I don't mean to hurt you. I'm sorry, this is just a very crucial part of the story so it needed to be written down. Hope I can update soon too. Thank you for reading...

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5123 October 18 2009, 19:00:16 UTC
ok i'll be waiting! :)

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darkhime88 October 18 2009, 19:18:13 UTC
I'm totally in love with this fic. I like the type of story in which a single seme father is in love with an uke loving children ^^. Hope they will end up being a couple soon.

Please update with the next longer chapter.

P/S: Still wait for Arabian nights hopelessly.

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1on31y24 October 19 2009, 04:23:12 UTC
Hi Lucy san, long time no see. Thanks for your comments. This time I wanted to write something different since well not a lot of people are comfortable with mpreg stories. The idea of Asami and Akihito having and raising a child together just seems good to me, so this time I tried a different approach. The other story is kind of jammed in my head. I have no idea how to get over this one point. As soon as I get some more ideas I'll start that up again, and I am trying to write the perfect love scene for you (it's kinda hard for me ^^;;;). Anyhow please continue supporting my works, ALL OF THEM not just the vf ones... :D

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safa56bmc October 19 2009, 18:59:24 UTC
awwwwwwwww....im stumpd...

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