Comments | 1on31y24: Family Matter Chapter 7

1on31y24

Family Matter Chapter 7

Nov 27, 2009 01:04

( FM7 )

family matters

Comments 23

5123 November 27 2009, 06:37:52 UTC

love love love it!!!! more more more more!!! please!!:)

1on31y24 November 27 2009, 07:40:08 UTC

Lol...gotcha. I'm writing it as soon as I can so please wait a little bit longer ok?

5123 January 24 2010, 06:27:56 UTC

ok cant wait!!^_^

darkhime88 November 27 2009, 07:18:05 UTC

I'm kind of strict toward Asami's characteristics, therefore, forgive me if I criticize too much, 'kay? First thing, I don't think Asami will babble like he did in his son's room, even though at that time he was drunk like a lord. With his personality, he will contact Kirishima to have his rival's identity searched from the night he met Hiro, not feel so disappointed and betrayed that he had to use wine to cure and check info the next day after he has his consciousness back. You make Asami become more lenient in this chapter, please make him sharp like before *cry*.

Besides, I want Aki's first things (kiss, love, sex) belong to Asami (although I hate this bastard a lot in the manga), how contradicting! Wait for your update!

How is your shoulder? I'm so touched when you say you try to post a new chapter with a dislocated shoulder. Take care of yourself and be better soon. Anyway, don't work so hard.

1on31y24 November 27 2009, 07:38:48 UTC

Shoulders ok...just hurts when I move my arm too much. I understand, that was just as episode. I think I mentioned before that in this story Asami's character will be a bit OOC so that explains the drunk babbling. Trust me it hurt me a lot more than you while I was writing that pathetic piece of monologue. But it had to be done. No worries Ryuichi chan will be back to his cold ol bastard self in the next chapter. Thank you for worrying about me, I really appreciate it. I got hurt in the first place because I had to be dumb and show off my skills that got rusty (rolls eyes). Ah well...I'll try to make the next chapter soon so keep waiting ok? *hugs* love you...

luna_yolly November 27 2009, 16:56:23 UTC

HAHAHA. Love it. Can't wait for more.

1on31y24 February 10 2010, 05:47:54 UTC

Thank you. Sorry for the late reply, I do apologize but you might have to wait a little longer. I lost my thread of thought for this story.

endless_love88 December 1 2009, 08:27:15 UTC

Love it XD. Thanks a lot.
Looking forward to the next chapter :)

1on31y24 February 10 2010, 05:48:14 UTC

Thank you. Please wait a little bit longer...

gen50 February 9 2010, 10:07:16 UTC

i rather enjoyed reading 1-7 in one go. looking forward to the rest of the story

1on31y24 February 10 2010, 05:49:06 UTC

As soon as I recall what I had planned this story will be back up, till then please enjoy my other humble works.