Wedding Wars Chapter 1

Dec 19, 2009 23:50

 
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ratul December 20 2009, 05:41:55 UTC
Awww i wanted to read a bit more :(

Awesome chapter .

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1on31y24 December 20 2009, 10:46:19 UTC
Hehe...thank you. Am working on the next chapter, should be up soon.

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safa56bmc December 20 2009, 06:08:46 UTC
so fie is back for aki..will go for aki's heart or is he in for a social "oh i missed u and drop by to see how u have been so far" visit????
hmmmmmmmmmmmm hooking..hooking up..so when is the next chapter..had my eggs and am in ur page...

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1on31y24 December 20 2009, 08:06:08 UTC
Read to find out what's really going on...and congrats on the eggs... :D

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5123 December 20 2009, 09:11:52 UTC
that was great!!!! loved how it started!!:O cant wait for more!!!

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1on31y24 December 20 2009, 10:47:16 UTC
Thanks a bunch. Your comments really make my day. I was anxious about the start but I am glad you're happy with it. I am writing the next chapter now, hopefully that'll be up soon too.

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sarkkhan December 20 2009, 09:52:38 UTC
I have waited for this, your summary sounded so interessting and finally i can read it, and it is great^^

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1on31y24 December 20 2009, 10:47:51 UTC
You are welcome. Hopefully you'll like the continuation too...

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lenka_san December 20 2009, 11:13:52 UTC
Hahahaha, that certainly was funny XD Especially the part with that girl idol grabbing Aki´s crotch XD Usually it´s some woman trying to make pass on Asami or man molesting Akihito, but this one was much better :D
I can´t help thinking that Fei is that type of man, who will be courting his love in any possible way. Which is of course quite embarrassing for the one on receiving end, when this attention isn´t welcomed XD
Anyway, I´m hooked up and waiting for more :D

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1on31y24 December 20 2009, 22:33:27 UTC
Lol I know. I was laughing so hard when I re read that part. Usually when I write a story I just get immersed in it then after that when I read it again I look at the problems (sad to say punctuations is not my strong point). I thought maybe I should do something different this time so yeah...glad everyone liked it so much...^__^

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