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Dreamscape: Part Seven
VII
//Here we are dusting down the stars
Here we are dusting down the stars
As I stood outside all alone
I could hear you coming back into the fold//
“Dusting Down The Stars”- Mobile
Sam falls asleep in Jess’ arms and he knows he can get used to the fact of waking up to her and seamless sky and surreal grass, but he wakes ( Read more... )
VII
//Here we are dusting down the stars
Here we are dusting down the stars
As I stood outside all alone
I could hear you coming back into the fold//
“Dusting Down The Stars”- Mobile
Sam falls asleep in Jess’ arms and he knows he can get used to the fact of waking up to her and seamless sky and surreal grass, but he wakes ( Read more... )
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and that's really it isn't it? their relationship right there.
Oh sweetie this ending? Just *flails* words can't describe.
please accept my humble love and worship and admiration for a brilliant story.
just off to pick up the pieces of my heart now. ;)
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Oh sweetie this ending? Just *flails* words can't describe.
*flails with you*
I will definitely accept all the love and worship I can get my greedy little hands on.
You just burned through those chapters and I sat in my chair squealing like a mad man waiting for you to finish.
So, so, so, SO glad you enjoyed.
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If you'd like more comments, let me know. If you want me just to shut up and say this was an enjoyable story with a lot of amazing imagery and a very complex bit of storytelling that worked in quite a few ways, we can just stop right there. *grins*
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See, the thing is, Sam DIDN'T come back. His mind/angels/whatever controls it all (since I'm lost on that myself) sent him back for reasons unknown. And that's why Sam's so angry at the end and so distant and just letting Dean do whatever he wants.
If you'd like more comments, let me know.
Yes please. *grabby hands*
If you want me just to shut up and say this was an enjoyable story with a lot of amazing imagery and a very complex bit of storytelling that worked in quite a few ways, we can just stop right there. *grins*
*smishes madly* Thank you! Thank you for reading and enjoying and all that lovely jazz.
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I'll remember this one for a long time.
And you just made my day =D
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Sam's my favorite by a long way but it's true Dean's easier to write a lot of the time, you did a tremendous job of getting into Sam's mind.
I truly felt insane and desperate with him.
Thankyou for this amazing, erethral story.
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Oh, thank you! Dean is much easier to write - Dreamscape was much of challenge because it was all Sam and it had to make a bit of sense.
I'm glad that I could evoke emotion through this story - it's what I always worry about. You can have a good story with excellent characterization, grammar and plot, but in my opinion, you have to make the reader FEEL something for it to be a great story.
And now I'm rambling!
Thank you again and again for reading this! *bows*
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And for Sam questioning if it was real in the end... I think in a way it doesn't really matter because for him it was real when he was there with Jess even if it may all just have happened in his mind. Do I make sense?
Sam Is an Onion - Too Many Freakin’ Layers and Always Makes You Cry
I love that line. *laughs*
Yeah, see, I read the note. ;)
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And for Sam questioning if it was real in the end... I think in a way it doesn't really matter because for him it was real when he was there with Jess even if it may all just have happened in his mind. Do I make sense?
That makes A LOT of sense. It doesn't matter to Sam at all, just that for a moment he had Jess again.
*hugs madly* Thanks for reading the afternote sweetie!
Thank you so much for reading and enjoying this!
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