This was brilliantly written and amazing; the details, Sam's sorrow, Jensen's helpless attraction... awesome. I can't quite get around the ending, though, because there are too many things implied by the other events. Not because it's sad, though I'm sorry for it, with the whole premise being tragic. But because I can't believe that the demon would leave Jensen alone, or that it wouldn't keep sending Sam visions. It's not gone, after all. I also have a hard time believing the Roadhouse crew wouldn't have gone to Spirit Lake. Any sequel likely? Whether there is or not, though; seriously, this is some really great writing. Gut wrenching exploration of unbearable grief. You implied things so well that I kept having flashes of Dean throughout and wanting to cry.
I doubt there is a sequel, but your comments have got me to thinking. I think I was just really excited to get it done and, at the time of writing it with very little sleep or falling asleep, it all made sense.
But, again - thank you for reading and the lovely comments! :)
I'm officially dead. Seriously - everything. Selling the Impala, the fights with the sleazy Hollywood agent, the vision, the fight when Sam tried to leave, the crazy kidnapping. Just...I'm slain. I'm a little heartbroken, my eyes are watery. My God, that was unspeakably good.
Wow, thank you! It was hard selling the Impala, but it worked so well with the story - it was like killing off one of the characters! But thank you so much for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed! (p.s., sorry about getting replying so late - summer was insane O.o)
Oh My God. THAT was an AMAZING journey. Just lovely, poetic writing, wonderful descriptions, great characterizations, sexy, had me on the edge of my seat wonderful. I bow to your talent. This was like a novel I couldn't put down. I read it all. Loved it all. You are amazing. The ending broke my heart and yet, it was so right. Sam blending into normal, yet separate from everyone. You just completely rocked my world!
Aww, thank you! *blush* That really means alot. I'm so glad you enjoyed it and it was that engrossing! (p.s., sorry about getting replying so late - summer was insane O.o)
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I can't quite get around the ending, though, because there are too many things implied by the other events. Not because it's sad, though I'm sorry for it, with the whole premise being tragic. But because I can't believe that the demon would leave Jensen alone, or that it wouldn't keep sending Sam visions. It's not gone, after all. I also have a hard time believing the Roadhouse crew wouldn't have gone to Spirit Lake. Any sequel likely?
Whether there is or not, though; seriously, this is some really great writing. Gut wrenching exploration of unbearable grief. You implied things so well that I kept having flashes of Dean throughout and wanting to cry.
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I doubt there is a sequel, but your comments have got me to thinking. I think I was just really excited to get it done and, at the time of writing it with very little sleep or falling asleep, it all made sense.
But, again - thank you for reading and the lovely comments! :)
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Selling the Impala really hurt, almost the most because it was hopeful.
This is really an excellent piece of writing, devastating, even.
Thank you.
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That is so true. *nods*
Thank you for reading! :)
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I really liked the way you put that together. It was just really, really sad.
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