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FILL: Charles/Erik, Healing - Just another phase of finding (2a/?) anonymous June 13 2011, 20:22:57 UTC
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“Raven, I know you want this as much as I,” Erik said over breakfast. She ignored him.

Meals here were a cold affair, though it wasn’t for lack of sunlight, nor of warm-bodied company. He remembered (in nightmares, in dreams) breakfasts, lunches, dinners by candlelight in a small, simple home. Other meals, too, he remembered from a sterilized room, sometimes intravenous and painful. Then again, after that, warmth from other sources than candlelight or spotlights ( ... )

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FILL: Charles/Erik, Healing - Just another phase of finding (2b/?) anonymous June 13 2011, 20:24:07 UTC
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Erik’s head itched.

Riptide continued waxed on about strategies for how to find recruits, and chalk board dust swirled as the man let his excitement take over.

Here (out there), a storm was brewing.

And Erik sat there looking around at his comrades. Half of him marveled at some with their youth and at others with their cruelty, while his other half wondered if he could afford to remove the helmet for even the briefest of moments.

But then he may see. And Erik vowed to keep as much of an advantage with his personal confidentiality as possible ( ... )

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FILL: Charles/Erik, Healing - Just another phase of finding (2c/?) anonymous June 13 2011, 20:36:50 UTC
He drew the door loudly shut after them and lashed out with the furnishings adorning the hallway. She had time to crystallize, but not before he caught her spread-eagled against the wall ( ... )

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Re: FILL: Charles/Erik, Healing - Just another phase of finding (2c/?) enderwiggin24 June 13 2011, 20:43:26 UTC
omg, sleep time, but I hope, tomorrow when I am back from my job, there will be new chapters!

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Re: FILL: Charles/Erik, Healing - Just another phase of finding (2c/?) anonymous June 14 2011, 01:01:35 UTC
I've it mapped out in my head at least, and will likely have more in a bunch soon. Seems as though we're on opposite sides of the globe, so perhaps it will work out well ;) Thank you again for such wonderful notes!

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Re: FILL: Charles/Erik, Healing - Just another phase of finding (2c/?) anonymous June 13 2011, 22:29:58 UTC
OP still completely hooked. The characterization is wonderfully realistic, I am thoroughly enjoying this!

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Re: FILL: Charles/Erik, Healing - Just another phase of finding (2c/?) anonymous June 14 2011, 01:03:38 UTC
I'm glad! Writing the bits between the big moments is the hardest, so I'm glad you're still enjoying this even during this time. :) Thanks again!

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Re: FILL: Charles/Erik, Healing - Just another phase of finding (2c/?) anonymous June 14 2011, 09:11:07 UTC
Do NOT cut any of these moments ^^ It can be painful when it's badly written, but when it has a style and a creativity like yours? I enjoy it very much, and it makes the big moments much better by anticipation.

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