FILL: Charles/Erik, Healing - Just another phase of finding (2a/?)
anonymous
June 14 2011, 15:10:39 UTC
He rose from a nest of blankets, blood in his mouth. His limbs felt taut, muscles straining to escape terrors no longer tangible threats, but nevertheless ever-present. Even merely in his own mind (in his guilt)His power had always been his one comfort, an indomitable force against those who would do him harm. Until only recently, when metal itself proved to be a tool he couldn’t always control, did he again feel betrayed by his power after he’d failed to find it from the first
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Re: FILL: Charles/Erik, Healing - Just another phase of finding (3c/5)
anonymous
June 14 2011, 17:00:18 UTC
OP says perfect! God how I love where you are going with this. i want to know what comes next but at the same time I want it to never end, like any truly good book I would read.
Theo’s hand was warm in his.
Oh my, oh my!
Erik is well defined in this, which is probably the one thing most X-men first class fics lack for me (as well as for Charles, actually). You can feel the conflict, how far he is ready to go and yet he is nothing like Shaw.
I wish you would de-anon! Or if you could direct me to some other fills you've written? If I had your talent, I would claim it :)
Re: FILL: Charles/Erik, Healing - Just another phase of finding (3c/5)
anonymous
June 14 2011, 22:38:53 UTC
You're too nice! Flattery makes the words flow so much more easily ;) And now I have the entire fic outlined, at least.
Erik is well defined in this This made me the happiest! I want my writing to make the characters more full and rounded, rather than merely having them act as empty puppets that look and mimic like the characters in a movie or book, if that makes sense. Anyway, I'm glad he doesn't seem flat to you.
Soon as I'm done, I'll de-anon! I'd like to finish it first before claiming it. Thanks again for your wonderful encouragement!
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Theo’s hand was warm in his.
Oh my, oh my!
Erik is well defined in this, which is probably the one thing most X-men first class fics lack for me (as well as for Charles, actually). You can feel the conflict, how far he is ready to go and yet he is nothing like Shaw.
I wish you would de-anon! Or if you could direct me to some other fills you've written? If I had your talent, I would claim it :)
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Erik is well defined in this
This made me the happiest! I want my writing to make the characters more full and rounded, rather than merely having them act as empty puppets that look and mimic like the characters in a movie or book, if that makes sense. Anyway, I'm glad he doesn't seem flat to you.
Soon as I'm done, I'll de-anon! I'd like to finish it first before claiming it. Thanks again for your wonderful encouragement!
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