Prompt Post: ROUND TWO

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ROUND TWO IS CLOSED

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ROUND TWO: Updates Post (WIPs only)

ROUND TWO: Fills Post (completed Fills only)

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Fill: Fractured (2a/3)

[telm_393]

Note: This doesn't entirely fill the prompt, sorry, because there isn't any tearing the rapists to shreds--I don't think I could write that, and am glad the previous fill had a brilliant scene in that vein. So...I'm really, really sorry to only half-fill, please don't hate me

Fill: Fractured (2b/3)

[telm_393]

Throughout the week he feels everybody's concern growing

[dailybee]

Re: Fill: Fractured (2b/3)

[telm_393]

Don't worry, there'll be a bit of closure. I'm working! Thank you, glad you like it

Re: Fill: Fractured (2b/3)

[telm_393]

My heart. You broke it.

The feelings... I just.

The stream of consciousness story telling works so perfectly, brings me right into flow of events and makes the pain of it all so much more visceral.

Thank you for this.

Re: Fill: Fractured (2b/3)

[telm_393]

Thank you so much for your kind words.

I'm so glad you like the stream of consciousness. Thank you again, your comment really made me feel good about this story!

Re: Fill: Fractured (2b/3)

[telm_393]

OOOOOOOOOOOH
Op is extremely, extremely grateful, anon. This is absolutely heart-breaking to read and just what I wanted, revenge or no revenge. I hope there'll be an update soon! :D

Re: Fill: Fractured (2b/3)

[telm_393]

Oh, thank you so much! I'm really very glad you like it and are okay with my changes, I was afraid you wouldn't be. Thanks again!

Re: Fill: Fractured (2b/3)

[talitha78]

Painful, but really well done.

Re: Fill: Fractured (2b/3)

[telm_393]

MY EMOTIONS!

Re: Fill: Fractured (2b/3)

[gogothgirl]

it hurts. ohmygawd it HURTS

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Re: Fill: Fractured (2b/3)

[ss_ophelia]

Oh my. I obviously should have waited until it was finished to read this one, because I'm not going to be able to stop thinking about it. Everything about this is so tense; you've handled it really deftly.

Re: Fill: Fractured (2b/3)

[telm_393]

Wow, thank you so much. I'm sorry I haven't updated, I will soon!

Re: Fill: Fractured (2b/3)

[ss_ophelia]

Awesome! I can't wait to read the rest. *waves pompoms of encouragement*

Re: Fill: Fractured (2b/3)

[dark_aura016]

This is so good. Please don't leave us hanging! You HAVE to finish this. Charles reaction feels so true to me. Everything is just hitting the perfect dramatic heartbeat.

Re: Fill: Fractured (2b/3)

[xmoonveilx]

Oh Charles! The poor thing WHY DOES IT HURT SO MUCH?? T_T