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Azazel/Riptide: Loud anonymous July 9 2011, 08:30:43 UTC
Erik wonders why Riptide doesn't talk much, but he's very loud when Riptide and Azazel have sex (it's hard not to hear when Riptide and Azazel spend so much time together). One day he asks Riptide about it.

Humor, please. And no cutting off Riptide's toungue, that would be nice! xD

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FILLED 1/? tane_the_insane September 24 2011, 05:21:43 UTC
Okay. This is completely...I don't even. Hm. I think this is possibly the strangest thing I have ever written. It is very odd. I am not even sure of what the tone is, exactly. I just...you said humor. So I tried to write as lightly as possible. Uh. Hm ( ... )

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Re: FILLED 2/? tane_the_insane September 24 2011, 05:22:46 UTC
He gave his plans for the evening up and took his papers downstairs, to work at the kitchen table. Emma, Mystique, and Angel were there as well, playing cards. Looking at the women, he remembered how Emma and Angel had so easily given in when he'd selected the large room ( ... )

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Re: FILLED 3/? tane_the_insane September 24 2011, 05:29:22 UTC
“Even I can't read everyone. Other telepaths, people who have trained against it. It's easy enough to learn. I have yet to meet the man who can keep quiet with Azazel though.” Angel looked as though she agreed with Emma, and Erik has the urge to ask for details, exactly.

“Not kitchen conversation.” Emma told him, without looking up from dealing.

And that was the end of that conversation.

That night, after another hand that he had lost, because damn it, Angel was cheating somehow, he heard Azazel reappear in his own bedroom, through the wall. There was the low sound of a voice, laughter, Riptide's, he thought.

There was more laughter, and then, right on cue, a low groan, Azazel's maybe. The string of incomprehensible Russian confirmed it, and Erik wondered what Riptide was doing to cause such a reaction. The Spanish that met his ears told him more than he needed.

“You like my hand around your cock, don't you? You like my mouth better.” Good god, did they never tire of each other? How many times could two people have sex in one ( ... )

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Re: FILLED 4/? tane_the_insane September 24 2011, 05:30:24 UTC
“I love you, so much, you do not even know, you don't,” Erik looked over in surprise. He'd never heard Riptide speak outside of his and Azazel's activities, but now he was, in Spanish of course.

Azazel was asleep on the settee, tail curled over his body, arms crossed, and now Riptide was crouched down over him, resting his head on the arm of the furniture. Erik didn't think he'd been seen yet. It was the only explanation for Riptide's sudden vocalness.

His face was just so fond, as he watched Azazel for a moment before standing, straightening his suit. That was when Erik emerged from the corner he'd been working in. For a moment, Riptide's face went completely blank before it slipped into his normal neutral expression. He nodded at Erik in greeting and walked past him, but Erik stopped him, with only a question.

“That accent, that's Mexican, isn't it?”

Riptide's expression twisted into terror, as he stared at Erik with wide eyes.

“Never assume, Riptide. Never assume a room is empty, never assume no one can hear you, and never ( ... )

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Re: FILLED 5/? tane_the_insane September 24 2011, 05:31:38 UTC
“Why are you angry with me?” The English is indeed stilted and stumbled over, but Riptide is making a good effort ( ... )

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Re: FILLED 5/? megan_moonlight September 26 2011, 08:06:09 UTC
I won't even bother to go anon here, I love this fill too much to hide <33333 Sorry it too me so long to comment - catching up with stuff taes a lot of time *lol*

I. LOVE. IT. SO. VERY. MUCH. And the capsloc was necessary!

I adore Emma here, and the way she talks to Erik, I adore the connection between Azzy and Rip... this is absolutely priceless!

I really, really want to squish you right now! <33333

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Re: FILLED 5/? alphawolfnami September 27 2011, 01:48:09 UTC
Ohhhh I need this updated like yesterdayyyy.. The tension... The language... Oh the suspense.. <3

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Re: FILLED 6/6 tane_the_insane September 27 2011, 02:29:46 UTC
Hm.

This was all Charles' fault. Charles would never have let him go tease Azazel. If Charles was here, this would never had happened.

Now he had to fix it.

“Can't you just,” He waved his hand vaguely near his temple.

“Even if I wanted to help you, I can't. Azazel has a kind of telepathy, and Riptide is shielded.”

He sighed and sulked for an hour before he went and found Azazel, who seemed to be doing his damnedest to actually draw blood from the training dummy.

“Azazel,” He started.

“Nyet. I am in no mood for chores today.” Not for the first time, Erik wondered what exactly he had gotten himself into by taking on these people ( ... )

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Re: FILLED 6/6 megan_moonlight September 27 2011, 06:07:41 UTC
I'm pretty sure I love the image of sulking Erik. And Azazel threatening him. I'm really, really loving the way you write Azazel <3

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Re: FILLED 6/6 tane_the_insane September 29 2011, 14:43:36 UTC
Well, this Azazel definitely felt a little more unhinged than the version I normally write, but I was trying to go for a very exaggerated feel with all of their characters, since it was supposed to be funny. However, I do feel like there would be some posturing going on if he ever felt like his personal property was being encroached on.

Sulking!Erik just seemed like fun. He has a lot to sulk over right now, in any case.

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Re: FILLED 6/6 megan_moonlight September 30 2011, 18:08:50 UTC
I admire being able to write one character in a couple different ways. I never can do that XD You really did a wonderful job!

Thank you again for filling this <3

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Re: FILLED 6/6 alphawolfnami September 27 2011, 09:36:41 UTC
Oh, okay. I'm dead. DEAD. Are you happy? My heart has been pumping so fast throughout the whole thing, because the tension between Erik and Azazel was just perfectly administered and just UNFFF. Okay. Okay, this was just perfection. Filler writer, I need to see your fanfics because I don't think I can handle going through the day without some more of your Azazel (and Riptide lol) because.. Auhghhhhhhhh.

And the chemistry was just there, with the funny little things Erik said, it was just sincerely well done. Just well done. I'm a little upset it's done but I suppose I'll just have to go wander about for some more Azazel/Riptide out there.. But well done. Well done indeed.

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Re: FILLED 6/6 tane_the_insane September 30 2011, 05:40:04 UTC
My Master Fic List

Just for you.

Oh yes, I loved writing the scenes between Azazel and Erik, because I felt like this Azazel was exactly one snide comment away from causing Erik some serious damage.

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Re: FILLED 6/6 anonymous September 29 2011, 09:31:58 UTC
This is epic and awesome. BWEE.

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Re: FILLED 6/6 tane_the_insane September 30 2011, 05:40:44 UTC
Happy you enjoyed it!

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