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Prompt Post: ROUND FIVE

Jul 03, 2011 22:06

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Alex/Hank + Scott anonymous July 3 2011, 21:30:28 UTC

Modern AU, where an older Alex (in his mid twenties?) somehow figures out/recieves the news that, no, his younger brother didn't die in the crash like he'd been told, and then sets out to find him. The catch is, Scott's been adopted and adores his 'dad', who is incidentally the adorkable Hank McCoy.

Soap drama plots, ahoy!

Re: this is only now (where do we go from here) 15/? anoncents July 16 2011, 18:54:52 UTC

ROMCOMS ARE THE BESTEST.

Also, thank you for clarifying Hank's job. Supremely helpful and the first scene makes sense now.

Re: this is only now (where do we go from here) 15/? beakanoma July 16 2011, 19:13:04 UTC

Was gonna wait til it was all posted to comment again, but had to say I didn't think it was contrived. Found it to be quite dramatic and inventive. Can't wait to read mooooore :D

Re: this is only now (where do we go from here) 15/? mediwitch3 July 16 2011, 23:14:58 UTC

You're fantastic. Update soon!

Re: this is only now (where do we go from here) 15/? noididnt July 17 2011, 01:12:34 UTC

I was so caught off guard by the hilariousness that is Sean and Raven having a conversation so my face basically went from :D to :O to !!! in less than a second.

EPIC SUMMERS BROTHERS LOVE IS EPIC. :'D

Re: this is only now (where do we go from here) 15/? anonymous July 17 2011, 02:59:59 UTC

This is a romcom, I can put in as many cliches as I want. XD

i agree, author!anon -- personally i love the romcom cliches. :D

thanks for the update! i can't wait to read the alex-scott-hank interactions. and, i can't wait to see how the Family (lol, makes them seem like the mafia or something) takes to this alex-shaped development.

this is only now (where do we go from here) 16/? anonymous July 19 2011, 04:15:50 UTC

The drive back home is nothing short of heart-wrenching for Hank ( ... )

this is only now (where do we go from here) 17/? anonymous July 19 2011, 04:18:20 UTC

"Before I found out?" Alex twists the mug between his hands. "A year and a half at the most. I got out, went home, only it wasn't home anymore."

"Then?"

"I used all the resources I had to go looking but it was a fucking closed adoption."

Hank winces at that. "It had to be."

Alex looks up, startled. "Why?"

Hank steels himself then starts telling Alex about the line of abuse Scott suffered at the hands of the foster system, an unfortunate and unlucky case, the social worker had said and Hank had almost punched him in the face for that.

He has to resort to the whiskey before he can finish.

Alex, though, looks absolutely wrecked"God," Alex breathes out, hands fisted in his hair. "God ( ... )

Re: this is only now (where do we go from here) 17/? anonymous July 19 2011, 04:37:07 UTC

PARENTHESES! AWW, POOR HANK. YOU'RE NOT ALONE, BB.

THE SUMMERS REUNION IS A MAJOR TEARJERKER. SCOTT'S WEE BABY FACE -- HIM HUGGING ALEX AND CLUTCHING HANK'S HAND TIGHTLY... THE THREE OF THEM AT THE BACK OF THE CAR -- LIKE A NUCLEAR FAMILY (I SEE WHAT YOU DID THAR!)

ALEX IN BLACK OPS? IS THAT HOT OR HOTTER? I ALREADY KNOW HIM AND ERIK WILL HIT IT OFF!

AND THEM SHARING ONE ROOF! SQUEE! I AM SO IN LOVE! <333333333333

Re: this is only now (where do we go from here) 17/? noididnt July 19 2011, 04:45:02 UTC

They're both so selfless, omg. T___T THEY JUST WANT SCOTT TO BE HAPPY. But they can be happy too! With each other.

Re: this is only now (where do we go from here) 17/? swing_set13 July 19 2011, 05:02:12 UTC

♥_______♥ I love you anon! This is just wonderfully spun. THEY JUST WANT SCOTT TO BE HAPPY!!!! OMG!!!!!!!! I love them both.

Re: this is only now (where do we go from here) 17/? cimness July 19 2011, 14:38:02 UTC

Take all the time you need, anon! This piece is beautiful. *_* And it flows wonderfully from the last one too.

Re: this is only now (where do we go from here) 17/? cadrina July 19 2011, 17:05:46 UTC

Oh so cute!!!! Need more!!!!! like now!!!!! please!!!!!!!

Re: this is only now (where do we go from here) 17/? mediwitch3 July 19 2011, 23:44:32 UTC

Oh my gosh. Update this soon! You're wonderful. :)

Re: this is only now (where do we go from here) 17/? anonymous July 20 2011, 06:03:17 UTC

I just adore this story to bits. I can't even begin to tell you.

Been stalking it for a while and now I am leaving a comment.

OMG PLEASE CONTINUE I LOVE THIS SO MUCH

this is only now (where do we go from here) 18/? anonymous July 21 2011, 04:56:07 UTC

"You invited a complete stranger to live in your home?" Raven shrieks at Hank once the door slams behind Alex, Sean and Scott.

Hank winces because a) ow, she's got a set of lungs on her and b) accurate. In the clear light of day, what he'd done the night before seemed both naive and dangerous though he has yet to regret it...much. Granted, there isn't much that can happen in the fourteen hours since he'd shown Alex the guest bedroom except perhaps waking up to a home-cooked traditional breakfast, Scott being up early enough to have polished three-quarters of his plate and Alex, shirtless, by the stove.

It's the shirtless part that still gets him.

"It seemed like the right thing to do," Hank replies, dodging Raven's flailing arms and heading for the linen closet.

"The right thing to do if you want to get robbed or murdered," she says, trailing so close that her ridiculous, eight hundred dollar boots catch the hem of his jeans. He trips and throws out his hand against the wall to keep himself from slipping only for Raven to ( ... )

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