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mini fill: i got my head but my head is unraveling (1/3) Charles/Erik

[anonymous]

OP, sorry I couldn't fulfill all your bonus points. Perhaps sometime in the future?

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In a motel room on the outskirts of Las Vegas, Angel asleep in the next room, Erik shoves him face down onto the bed and presses down on him. The "No" is on Charles' lips, but it dies there as nothing more than a sigh, as Erik bites down on the back of Charles' neck. It's a mark of possession, a mark of fondness, and Charles has never had anyone -

- I want you so much

Want him that much. Or at all, really, that wasn't by Charles' faint influence. And this, perhaps, or then again most definitely is Charles' own influence as well. Everything that he said, all the talk of connection and not being alone and -

I felt you, under my skin. I still feel you there.Make it stop. Make it stop

mini fill: i got my head but my head is unraveling (2/4) Charles/Erik

[anonymous]

...that was supposed to be longer. um, (2/4) then, sorry. Clearly I am not to be trusted with anonymity.That's a surprise, then

Re: mini fill: i got my head but my head is unraveling (3/4) Charles/Erik

[anonymous]

But: that's not why he's really nervous. It's what Erik's thinking. Of how these children will never be soldiers. Of how futile this trip is, and how he will do it if it gets him closer to Shaw. Of Charles, and eventually all thoughts are buried under the ones of Charles. On his back, on his hands and knees - on his knees, his cheeks flushed and his lips red and his mouth stretched wide and glistening, and surely he's not this louche, surely he's never been this obscene, never begged for it the way Erik is imagining he will. "Charles," Erik says, slow and lazy and brimming with promise, and Charles sinks obligingly to his knees

Re: mini fill: i got my head but my head is unraveling (4/4) Charles/Erik

[anonymous]

Erik appears in the mirror behind him, and Charles snaps, "What is this, a public bathroom," and just as quickly apologizes as Erik's face turns blank, as he turns gracefully to exit. "I didn't mean that. I'm sorry. Stay. Stay

Re: mini fill: i got my head but my head is unraveling (4/4) Charles/Erik

[richiexcore]

This is amazing. So quietly unsettling, and so heartbreaking! Seriously, just... baww... Charles going along with it for Erik, and that he really does feel things for him but can't bring himself to change their situation by just speaking up. And that Charles is so smothered by his relationship with Erik, and Erik just doesn't notice at all, it seems.

So bittersweet and beautiful, really, anon, just awesome.

OP

[anonymous]

AHHHHH are you kidding I don't mind about the bonus points; I'm just so glad someone filled this!!!!! Ooooo, and that was dark. And sad. And wonderful. All at the same time. The Charles being straight definitely made the whole thing. It was so heartbreaking, because Erik really does care but he doesn't understand how different Charles is from him. *cries* Thank you that was amazing!

Re: mini fill: i got my head but my head is unraveling (4/4) Charles/Erik

[anonymous]

that is so sad poor charles !! thanks anon

Re: mini fill: i got my head but my head is unraveling (4/4) Charles/Erik

[ascoolsuchasi]

Oh wow. This was brilliant and so heartbreaking and gad. This was amazing, good job nonnie!

Re: mini fill: i got my head but my head is unraveling (4/4) Charles/Erik

[talitha78]

Oh, wow. That was intensely disturbing, but so good.

Re: mini fill: i got my head but my head is unraveling (4/4) Charles/Erik

[anutty1]

This was fantastic!