Re: FILL: Try, Try Again, 3/?
anonymous
June 7 2011, 00:55:22 UTC
AAAAAHHH! D: This is amazing. I especially love how you work in repetition, but vary it just enough each time so that it seems fresh. I await with bated breath. *gnaws fingernails*
FILL 2: Are you ready for this?pinkninjapjJune 7 2011, 00:56:26 UTC
Are you ready for this?
Day 0: Let’s find out They join hands, a line of mutants facing against their own kind, their backs to the humans. The helmet feels strange and heavy on his head and there’s still blood on his fingers. The children stare back at him, defiant, stricken, young.
Erik stops himself from looking down at the sprawled figure of Charles, panting in pain, his head cradled in Moira’s lap. He definitely doesn’t look at his friend’s hands twitching helplessly in the sand.
And he most assuredly doesn’t clench his jaw because Charles is looking at Raven with love shining in his eyes.
He tightens his grip on Raven’s gloved hand until she makes a small noise. Erik turns his head and nods sharply at Azazel. The other mutant takes the nod as the order it is.
Wisps of red-tinged cloud surround them and they are pulled from existence.
Day 1: I can do this.‘Are you ready for this
( ... )
Re: FILL 2: Are you ready for this? (above should be 1/?)pinkninjapjJune 7 2011, 01:38:13 UTC
Sorry, this prompt tickled me. I'll keep all my subsequent sections as replies to this post so as not to interfere with the awesome fill going on already.
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Anon, I love this and am too playing the F5 game like mad for the next installment.
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this is so good
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Please keep writing!
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Love it.
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Day 0: Let’s find out
They join hands, a line of mutants facing against their own kind, their backs to the humans. The helmet feels strange and heavy on his head and there’s still blood on his fingers. The children stare back at him, defiant, stricken, young.
Erik stops himself from looking down at the sprawled figure of Charles, panting in pain, his head cradled in Moira’s lap. He definitely doesn’t look at his friend’s hands twitching helplessly in the sand.
And he most assuredly doesn’t clench his jaw because Charles is looking at Raven with love shining in his eyes.
He tightens his grip on Raven’s gloved hand until she makes a small noise. Erik turns his head and nods sharply at Azazel. The other mutant takes the nod as the order it is.
Wisps of red-tinged cloud surround them and they are pulled from existence.
Day 1: I can do this.‘Are you ready for this ( ... )
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