20 Notes: Teru Mikami x Kiyomi Takada

[viola_canina]

Title: Put Your Hands On Me
Author: Viola (viola_canina)
Claim: Teru Mikami x Kiyomi Takada
Rating: ...PG-13, I think?
Notes: This fic contains some spoilers for the last part of the manga, so be careful. Big thanks to speaky_bean for editing this!

Comments

[phishy]

Great stuff! I've always liked the the Mikami/Takada pairing, even if I wasn't really crazy about them as individuals. I especially liked how you kept them in character (ie. Mikami's inner framework being KAMIII~! > everyone else). XD

What's also great was the reminder that Takada was not, in fact, the power-hungry whore that fandom makes her out to be. Just an idealistic woman who dated the wrong guy in college.

In short, I really enjoyed. Thanks for sharing!

[viola_canina]

Well, I LOVE Teru and Kiyomi as individuals, so I really enjoy writing about them and I'm glad that you like this fic. ^_^ Thank you very much! And yes, while Kiyomi may be somewhat interested in power and influence, she's also a very normal woman.

[istne_pieklo]

They seem so perfectly logical together. They way you write them is amazing; I've never really liked neither Mikami nor Takada, but I must admit I'm looking forward to your stories)))
I love the way this one is written in separate sentences. And the characters are so incredibly IC! Great job! ^__^

[viola_canina]

Thank you! It's great that you like it even though you aren't a big fan of the pairing itself. ^_^

[speaky_bean]

As I told you already, I absolutely loved this thing. It was quite simple, which worked well in this case. I actually really envy that style. Also, there was a great mix of 'ohmygod that's adorable' and 'canon!depressing!' moments. Good job! ♥

[viola_canina]

^^ Thank you so much. Well, they ARE adorable. In a way. >.>

[speaky_bean]

In a really bizarre way, they really are. I guess it's possible to interpret almost anything as adorable, whether it is or not, but I wind up going all fuzzy and going 'n'yawwwww!' a lot whenever I see things to do with these characters.

[dune_master]

This is shockingly canon and really well written. Nicely done!

[viola_canina]

Thank you!

[warplanes]

Wow-- your characterization is absolutely dead on. You did a positively wonderful job on this, and while I'm not much for this pairing you've made me want more.

[viola_canina]

This is my Death Note OTP, so I WILL write more. Thank you!