The Takada Kiyomi I've Spent So Long On

[akaihikari]

Title: Pursuit of Excellence
Author: AkaiHikariRating: PG12... Maybe lower...
Character: Kiyomi Takada
Notes: I took, I feel, far too many liberties with her character, but I did enjoy writing it and obsessing over how to make it better until, eventually, I went, "Just post it already!!"

Comments

[aliveinchrist13]

This is excellent. I admit I'm not a fan of Takada, simply because I'm a huge fan of Misa's and the way she treated her just ticked me off. Also because she seems so fake to me, but you managed to take that and twist it into something that makes me like her. I don't think you took too many liberties; it was actually very well-done and it all seemed terribly in-character. And the final line bit perfect. <3