Title: Good Intentions [3/?] Author: Molly Pairing: Billie/Jason White Rating: R Summary: "You're the talk of the school." Previous parts: found here Notes: Your comments rock my world <3
I forgot to leave a comment on the last part, so I'll say here that I quite enjoyed it.
I'm really liking the overall feel of this story. It feels real, y'know, and that's always nice in a story. I also love love love how you write Billie, I'm sure I've told you this before but your characterization of him is always a nice one to read.
So yeah. Keep it up because I can't wait for more!
:D I was so happy to see this today! So glad you updated.
I definitely squeeed out loud (becuase I am that much of a dork, apparently) when Billie spilled his coffee. So cute!
"Hot?" Billie Joe repeated, dumbfounded. The tips of his ears flushed, and he glanced bashfully away from Jason's amused gaze. "You've got to be fucking kidding me, Jase."
ahh! I loved that, so great.
Can't wait for more, you're doing so well with this!
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I'm really liking the overall feel of this story. It feels real, y'know, and that's always nice in a story.
I also love love love how you write Billie, I'm sure I've told you this before but your characterization of him is always a nice one to read.
So yeah. Keep it up because I can't wait for more!
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I definitely squeeed out loud (becuase I am that much of a dork, apparently) when Billie spilled his coffee. So cute!
"Hot?" Billie Joe repeated, dumbfounded. The tips of his ears flushed, and he glanced bashfully away from Jason's amused gaze. "You've got to be fucking kidding me, Jase."
ahh! I loved that, so great.
Can't wait for more, you're doing so well with this!
<3
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