i'm going way down south

[21enemies]

Title: Brutal Love [23]
Author: Molly
Pairing: Billie/Mike
Summary: Tre also wasn't foolish enough to believe any pretty little lies he could spin for Billie Joe would make him feel better; all of the “it's going to be ok”s in the world were not going to take away Mike's cancer.
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Comments

[strychninetwist]

That little memory at the start was so sweet and entertaining at the same time. I like how at such a difficult time Billie's thinking over such a crucial memory. I hate to think how you make the emotions and the reactions so real, but they really make this story amazing. It's quickly become one of my favourites and I haven't even seen it all yet! I love how supportive yet realistic Tré is aswell, being both a good friend and what I'd imagine as a realistic portrayal of the character. Again - great job :)

[21enemies]

I'm so happy that you're enjoying this story as much as you are. Your evaluations are very important to me, and I appreciate every comment you leave. I'm also glad the realism is coming across as much as I want it to; it's one of the most important qualities I want to have in my writing.

Thank you for reading--and for everything else, for that matter xx