Comments | 24femmeslash: Let's Get This Party Started

birdseyeview in 24femmeslash

Let's Get This Party Started

Jul 11, 2005 00:06

I wrote a little ficlet for the "Fingertips" challenge that I'm still working on. (Yes, still.)

It's Nina/Michelle and a solid "R" I think.

Right now, it's untitled.

( Nina had information. This was nothing. )

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libbi July 11 2005, 05:11:42 UTC

*glomps*

Yay for Nina slash! :D

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Re: Sorry for late response libbi July 19 2005, 18:08:26 UTC

Well of course. She's my best girl. She can do anything. :)

suitem July 11 2005, 05:44:51 UTC

Ooooh very nice. I like the line especially-- the whole thing feels very Michelle.

You set the mood with the music/club up really nicely and the story was very rhythmic to go along with it. *loves*

suitem July 11 2005, 05:45:07 UTC

last line especially*

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Re: Sorry for late response suitem July 24 2005, 17:36:30 UTC

I have trouble with her too. Pesky feminists like she and Teri always make me feel like I'm Mary Sue-ing just b/c they're the characters I could relate to the most except uh... Chloe

jadethe2nd July 11 2005, 07:40:28 UTC

Niiiice.

I especially like the parentheses in the last paragraph. Somehow they add to the feeling that the words in them might not be 100% true :D

And yay for first post in community!

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Re: Sorry for the late response suitem July 24 2005, 17:33:19 UTC

I so have to write another Chappy fic now that that one's totally uncanon (since you found out he was a widower.)

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acuriousfaith July 11 2005, 10:38:21 UTC

Wow, i like this. It's very intense :) Everything seemed to flow very well. :)

jaybee65 July 11 2005, 19:23:42 UTC

Oh, excellent! A yummy pairing, and great atmospherics!