If I Lose you Tonight...

[26tardis]

I could draw in a hundred light years, the grin you make when I show up. I could bribe anyone or nail myself in to a cross if that inspire you to say see you later. I could even walk on fire. If you love as I want.

“I came back for you!” Those words hung in the thick air, as blue eyes stared at him in disbelief. His mind could not grasp its

Comments

[owensheart]

OOH nice start, cant wait to read more.

Thanks...

[26tardis]

As you notice, am a newbie in LJ, and i did not know how to used promise to work on it.
Thanks again, glad you liked.

26tardis

Re: Thanks...

[owensheart]

Hey dont mention it! I was a newby once too and I would have really liked someone to help me, as it was I took someone about 6 months to say "hey this is how you do your links" heh heh

If you have any questions feel free to ask me and I'll help if I know how, still a few things I dont know how to do yet either.

*hugs*

Arigato...

[26tardis]

Yeah I could use some help... And i love your icon he looks so cute, and cute is not a word I use to describe Owen most of the times.

26Tardis.

[aviv_b]

Very good beginning

- I hope you don't mind if I point out a few things (cause you are new).

Lines between paragraphs cause some of us old folks have trouble reading on line. And re-read before posting - you have a few wrong word choices which I'm sure are due to spellchecking too fast (I do this too!).

However, these minor issues did not make the story unreadable.

[ktswaz]

Owen said something nice!! Wow. Wonders never cease!

lol

[26tardis]

I know he has a heart somewhere in there...