Rock 'n Roll Chapter thirteen

[27bluebirds]

Genre: AU/AU
Pairing: Ennis/Jack
Word count: 2046
Warnings: English is not my native language and this is not beta-ed. Strange grammar and word choice may result from it. As far as our boys go: no warnings. I feel like adding another warning: there will be some juicy stuff in this story, but it will be few. Additional warning for chapter thirteen:

Comments

[grlewis]

no wasted time here waiting for the guys to get together, you just skipped right on to it. so far i like the way the conversation is going. i'm thinking it may be too soon for enis to go looking for a new job yet, so there may have to be another visit before he committs. poor ennis really is pulled in different directions here. except that he knows how he feels for jack.....

[27bluebirds]

You're right on with everything you said! And there will be more pulling in different directions for Ennis...
Thank you for reading and leaving feedback, I'm grateful for every comment.

[27bluebirds]

Hi Tina,
oh yes, more time is needed. They're building a relationship away from Hawaii, away from vacation-paradise and now have to integrate the other into their regular lives. However, what form that will take will have to be seen.... ;)
Thank you for sharing your thoughts! XO

[luvenck]

"I thought gay, straight, what the hell, let them think what they want."

Pretty much sums up how people TODAY Should think... but there are so many idiots out there!

~ LuvEnck ~

BTW... I have done Beta work for 6 years, and I have to compliment your work, when it's not your Native language! This is exceptionally done very well, with very few errors. You should be VERY proud of yourself!

[27bluebirds]

Thanks again for all your comments! Hope you'll enjoy the rest of the story.

BTW... I have done Beta work for 6 years, and I have to compliment your work, when it's not your Native language! This is exceptionally done very well, with very few errors. You should be VERY proud of yourself!

Thud! Now I'm floored. Thank you so much for your words!

I have no idea how cooperating with a beta works. I'll PM you with some questions about it, if you don't mind.

[blackbird_y]

Jack's story is so sad BUT at the same time he's so bloody positive about everything..I dunno how he does it. *sigh*

Nev

[27bluebirds]

Jack's all right. No worries here.
Thanks for taking the time to comment so frequently while reading!