What's Left of Him

Sep 03, 2009 23:25



Title: What's Left of Him

Summary: Written for the an fma ihop kink meme. Prompt was "Roy finding Ed working for Madame Christmas, who took him in after returning from the other world without anyone knowing." It's a little shotty on plot details, but it turned out decent.

Rating: NC17

Story :3 NC-17 Content Warning )

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jokerlove September 4 2009, 05:28:15 UTC
holy shit i'm first! O.O anyway

The end totally made up for it (and i mean MADE UP FOR IT GOOD!) But WTF was that with the gate I was like holyshitholyshit no he didnt but yes .. yes he did and i couldn't believe that Ed was still alive after that! i would think he'd suicide major! I really like it when Ed attacks Roy and just about rapes him! Rape or be raped Roy! Those are the choices!!! >=P but sadness that Ed stays at the brothel i want him to be happy and only sleep with Roy >=I Ah well I'll pretend that eventually they get to that point and it all works out*yeah fangirlism*

thank you so much for this your great!
~Joker

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femaleshinigami September 4 2009, 14:32:30 UTC
Hahaha I liked this, even if it was a bit dak in places :D Great work!

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fritz42 September 4 2009, 16:11:23 UTC
I am so glad to know who wrote this wonderful story on fma ihop kink meme! I had read it there and loved it immediately! You have captured both of them beautifully! I love how out of Ed's tragedy Roy is able to find him, and together they can now help each other out.

Madame Christmas was fantastic! No wonder Roy turned out like he did!

Thanks for this great story.

"T"

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amethyst_koneko September 5 2009, 05:25:50 UTC
Very good. Odd that this fic has such tragedy in the middle (Ed killed Al?!?! O_O! Ed turns to prostitution to cope? O_o?) but ends so lightly with smiles and chuckles from Roy and Mme Christmas. There's a part of me that's screaming that Roy needs to go back in there and save Ed just like he did long ago on that fateful night. Ed needs a new reason to live and pull himself out of this disaster and Roy's just the man for the job. With any luck, so it will be. :)

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cold_cappuccino September 6 2009, 14:49:44 UTC
Oh wow. That was ...awesome. It was like getting a little bit of everything awesome in the story. It's kind of funny but dark at the same time and dear god, the way you inserted the plot of the whole thing with the sex it was just amazing.

Kudos to you~!

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