Prologue to Dont Rely On Me

Feb 04, 2010 11:32


Title: Don't Rely On Me
Author: Ponti (that's me)
Rating: NC-17 in the beginning, quickly mellows out to a PG-13
Spoilers: None
Warnings: A lot of still unexplained plot.
Summary: After Al's body has been returned and Edward has withdrawn from the military, Edward became a detective and is practically begged by the military to help solve the major cases ( Read more... )

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oh_so_blase February 4 2010, 20:18:48 UTC
i wish this was longer. i really want to read more it soon.
great first chapter.

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2minds1brain February 4 2010, 20:35:12 UTC
thanks :3 I've got a few ideas but I don't know how or if I'll develop them yet

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amethyst_koneko February 5 2010, 04:30:57 UTC
*headdesks repeatedly* I don't know which I should be more frustrated at - the damned phone interrupting some seriously awesome sex (Sorry, but if it was me, that phone would just keep right on ringing! When you're bangin' Roy Mustang, duty be damned! XD) or the fact that this chapter is so short! "A lot of still unexplained plot" definitely needs some 'splainin'! :)

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2minds1brain February 5 2010, 13:42:13 UTC
lol okay okay! I know it's pathetically short but I didn't know if it was worth continuing.
looks like I have a lot of writing to get done!

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nearest_escape February 6 2010, 02:05:02 UTC
What a lovely thing to find on my LJ today. I want to read more of this. I like your style and your characterizations. I read both that you posted to the comm. Is there more FMA writing from you? (I'll take a look.) Please develop this storyline! I am eager to see where this goes!

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2minds1brain February 6 2010, 04:33:38 UTC
awwww thank you so much! I just /love/ it when people tell me that my writing has potential! I've written some other stuff. Like a oneshot and a bunch of unfinished stories that I'll get to someday. This one is getting the best response right now though, so I'm working on the first chapter for next week!

Splee ♥

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