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[2ndrateromance]

Title: The price you pay for the life you lead
Pairing: Multiple, but this chap almost Zacky/??
Rating: PG describes stripping
Summary: Zacky is a stripper/dancer, Matt is his boss.... and the rest is to be written....

Comments

[piecesxmended_]

oh man. so I hope you contnue. it's good..and i'm really curious now. haha.

[2ndrateromance]

<3 thanks i'm planning the next chapter now

[bring_ur_knives]

ohhh who is it!? i want to know so please please continue! stripper Zacky is hot :)

[2ndrateromance]

heh you shall find out soon enough

[yourfavoritesyn]

I agree, stripper Zacky is very hot. I actually kind of hope it will be James, because that pairing is so rare.

This is really good, I hope you keep it up.

[2ndrateromance]

hmmmm perhaps, its not who i orignally planned on, but i'll think about it

thanks :)

[to_hellxweride]

Wow this rocks.

I love how Zacky has self respect still, which is rather rare in stripper stories.

This is very well written.

[2ndrateromance]

aww thank you :)

[tinkerhellish]

Zacky in short shorts makes me giggle. Zacky writhing around all slicked up...well...yes...enjoyable muchly.

You best continue!

The only criticism i have is (should you be writing another pole dance bit) you may wanna find another word for "pole". I still loved it, it was just repetative in certain points.

But, yes, CONTINUE!

[2ndrateromance]

lol it was a nice yet kind of funny mental picture while i wrote it

i shall

yea i was cringing while i wrote that bit, i couldnt think of whatelse to call it....

i'm planning the next bit right now

[tinkerhellish]

yeah i've had that happen to me many a times. Most of the time I don't realize that i've said the word over and over again until i re-read it. I still really liked the entire description of him dancing, and i give you mad props for writing it...because now that i think of it, there's probably not that many words to describe a pole.