Last man standing

[2smokinbarrels]

Underground compition brewed like a couldron

Comments

I got pickle, I got dollar, hey hey hey hey

[kawaiiurania]

I'm the first to post! (Yea, I'm a dork like that)

I'm not a big fan or guns, BUT this is well written. I like your analogies, and your voice and language is strong.

Continue to write.

-Joanna-

[anonymous]

The more and more I read these, the more and more I can see them published and famous. This story is the most fast paced of yours I've read. The action is solid, and the imagery is invading to the senses. It's as if you can smell the sulfur and lead from the freshly departed shell...Excellent work. There's a touch at the end of each of your stories, you combine a purpose and a resolve to the madness, how ever harrowing, still ties the story together seamlessly. I look forward to the next one. Cheers.

chris

chris

[thoughts_galore]

wow, that was amazing.. very violent, but it had an interesting plot at the same time.

your poems kick ass!

[gigglyshy]

hott stuff!

[deadlycitrus]

w00t! another excellent one. you really should update more often. it would make LJ-life MUCH more enjoyable.