Comments | 30_hath: Emotional Scratches (Lyras) (02 Aug)

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Emotional Scratches (Lyras) (02 Aug)

Aug 03, 2006 11:24

Title: Emotional Scratches
Author: lyras
House: Hufflepuff
Date/Challenge: 02 August
Characters: Ginny, Tom/Voldemort, references to Harry and Molly
Rating: PG
Word Count: 207
Genre/Warnings: Gen. A bit abstract; shameless mangling of mythology.

( He whispers his secrets to her, promises her a castle, a dream, a world, and around him the clouds swirl green and grey. )

Comments 8

kethlenda August 3 2006, 03:21:04 UTC

Wow, this is gorgeous and creepy.

lyras August 3 2006, 05:35:12 UTC

Thank you! Am distracting myself from my ficathon pieces again...

spessartine August 9 2006, 01:11:12 UTC

Ooh, yummy. Love the imagery in this.

lyras August 10 2006, 03:31:37 UTC

Love the imagery in this.

Thank you! That's exactly what I'm trying to work on at the moment in my writing, so I'm glad you liked it.

pre_raphaelite1 August 15 2006, 05:58:00 UTC

Oh wow... This is just lovely. I love the last line, the way you've taken the familiar and twisted it so simply but so beautifully.

lyras August 15 2006, 06:44:28 UTC

Thank you! I love that last line, too - I was wondering what other people made of it, so I'm glad you liked it.

How did you find this, btw? I'm just curious because you're the second person on my flist to review here (rather than on my LJ) without belonging to the community!

pre_raphaelite1 August 15 2006, 06:48:24 UTC

Oh! Yes, I loved it very much.

As for why I'm here, this is linked on darklord_news. *smiles* So that is probably where the other person came from as well!

lyras August 15 2006, 06:59:39 UTC

Aha - thanks! Hmm, another newsletter...