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#75 (forgive; overlook; second-chance) and apology

Mar 10, 2008 22:39

Title: Unforgivable
Author: samisweet
Theme: #75 forgive; overlook; second-chance
Summary: I know I should be stronger. I should let my anger overtake me and hit him and scream at him... But what can I do? I can't let go of him.
Pairing/Characters: Shunsui (Bleach)/Usagi
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: I, sadly, am not the owner of Bleach nor Sailor Moon, but ( Read more... )

theme: forgive; overlook; second-chance, character: usagi tsukino, author: samisweet

Comments 2

samisweet March 15 2008, 16:07:03 UTC

Ehehe... I'll see if I can grant myself the luxury of being around more ( ... )

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samisweet March 18 2008, 14:43:51 UTC

Okay, thanks! I'm sorry if I'm not clear with my intentions ^^;; It's easy for a writer to sometimes forget that what goes on in their mind doesn't always make to paper, lol. I'll tweak it a little to make it better! And it feels nice to be getting critiques that isn't someone editing my essay... especially since it's from you! ^^V I missed your comments, lol.