Comments | 30_houshin: theme no. 87 (multiple personalities; behind the mask; what lies beneath)

beneathsnow in 30_houshin

theme no. 87 (multiple personalities; behind the mask; what lies beneath)

Jun 07, 2008 08:50

Title: Morning Bliss
Author: Anaraine
Theme(s): #87 multiple personalities; behind the mask; what lies beneath
Summary: Bakura is not so nefarious as he would like people to believe...
Pairing/Characters: Bakura x Makoto x Ryou
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I do not own Sailor Moon & Yuugiô, or their characters and plotlines. I am neither receiving payment ( Read more... )

author: anaraine, character: makoto kino, theme: multiple personalities; behind th

Comments 2

sinspirations June 8 2008, 17:29:28 UTC

Very cute! I don't think the ending was too abrupt at all. You clearly demonstrated both sides of the Bakura/Ryou coin then cut it before breaking the balance. Can't wait to see what else you've got up your sleeve!

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beneathsnow June 22 2008, 07:15:57 UTC

Oooh, you lovely wonderful person you. This is what I needed to hear. And what you asked for was a lot of the stuff that got cut out. Because I ended up flashing back to when they had first met and how things snowballed into their current relationship. But It was just taking forever, and I'm really bad at finishing long things. Because I love to write longer stories, but they continue... and never seem to stop properly. So I have to actively chop my work and make things stop.

I'm re-editing this shot into a version 2 novella, that isn't focused mainly on the theme. I am actually really unsatisfied with this version, but I wanted to get one out there, dammit.

Thanks again! and I'm sorry I didn't reply sooner; I was out of town.