Gah! I think my heart is broken now. You know how you hold your hands over your eyes and peer through your fingers to make it through the scary parts of a film. I feel that way about this. I can hardly wait to see what happens next but I'm trepidatious at the same time. This is wonderfully well-written - Zach's fierce protectiveness is a nice respite to the stark, harsh reality of prison life and Chris' past.
Your comment makes me smile. I am pleased you enjoy the story, and the characters. I hope that your heart will mend. Knowing you are excited and a bit scared about reading the rest of the story let's me know I did something right when writing it.
Thanks for the compliment, bb. Aw, I am glad you like my story and the plot development. Thank you so much for the comment. And I can promise more plot to come in the part I will post tonight.
Super glad you are still reading and enjoying (which always feels like an odd word with a fic like this, but the message is there, hopefully) the story. I will have part 4 up later tonight. As for the shaking and crying I offer tissues and hugs in advance.
my brain... left me alone around about Part 3 and just came back... this is painful and raw and... I won't say I love it, because that would make me a completely terrible person, but I love you for writing it, if that makes any sense...
I say I'm glad you find it painful and raw only because that means the story is doing its job. I also completely understand your wanting to love it but then really *thinking* about it and going...wait a minute...I have those moments a lot, I had a lot of them while writing this. Basically, I'm glad you're still reading...thanks for the wonderful comment, bb!
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my brain... left me alone around about Part 3 and just came back... this is painful and raw and... I won't say I love it, because that would make me a completely terrible person, but I love you for writing it, if that makes any sense...
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I say I'm glad you find it painful and raw only because that means the story is doing its job. I also completely understand your wanting to love it but then really *thinking* about it and going...wait a minute...I have those moments a lot, I had a lot of them while writing this. Basically, I'm glad you're still reading...thanks for the wonderful comment, bb!
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