AH BWAH... (think it's going to be my main form of first reaction for this story)
This was so hot and sweet and scarring and holy crap, Chief Justice! wow, for some reason I didn't see that coming, even though I kind of knew he was high up after the visit, since most visits are at least peripherally monitored...
I'm pleased I threw something in the story that you didn't see coming...it always makes stories more fun to read when you don't quite know what's going to happen next, or find this part that just makes you go, woah. Thanks for commenting!
Another excellent chapter. Poor, poor Chris - so messed up about love and love making. I like that Zach controls himself even if he feels like just taking Chris against his will. He knows it will just damage him more; and it's interesting how Zach who is obviously not a nice guy can be so tender and sweet with Chris and show him what loving sex can be all about.
So glad you're still enjoying (which always sounds weird with dark fics) the story. Zach has very strict rules for himself, and for Chris...And he's not a nice guy but Chris just manages to wiggle his way under Zach's skin. I'm glad the layers of their personalities is coming through to you. Thanks for commenting!
Aw! I'm glad you like this story and it hasn't scared you off my writing all together! The dynamic between Zach and Chris really shifts during this chapter; it pleases me that you like it. Thanks for commenting!
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This was so hot and sweet and scarring and holy crap, Chief Justice! wow, for some reason I didn't see that coming, even though I kind of knew he was high up after the visit, since most visits are at least peripherally monitored...
*prostrates* jesus this one is awesome!
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i love the tenderness between these two!!
i am really looking forward to the final update tonight!
keep up the good work! i look forward to more of your works in the future! i hope it's more au! <3
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