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[gorillasr4eatin]

desperate lover
he wants another
he'll bring out the savage in you
oh the things that he'd do..
he grabs her and paws her
he violently claws her
she bites his tongue in her mouth
as the tears they start to pour out
of her eyes
is her disguise
so the guilt wont show
but he knows
the passion and hatreds too much
in his touch
as much as she wants his fire
its to much to seek to aspire
i cannot fall in love for one night
it aint right it aint right it aint right
one more night is all i could stand
and this broken heart wont ever love again

critique, please?