(for soopremo) Undimmed By Time, Unbound By Death

Jan 13, 2015 20:38

For: soopremo

Title: Undimmed By Time, Unbound By Death
Genre: Angst, Drama
Rating: NC-17
Side-Pairing: Baeksoo
Warnings: character death, violence, abuse of psychedelic drugs
Length: 7,000 words
Summary: And he is angry and hollow and won’t be silenced.

DON’T LET THEM LIE TO YOU )

genre: drama, pairing: baekhyun/kyungsoo, day: 3, pairing: jongin/kyungsoo, genre: agnst, warnings: read, length: oneshot

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soopremo January 15 2015, 04:16:43 UTC
/CLAWS FACE/ SPOT SPOT SPOOOOT

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soopremo January 15 2015, 19:33:29 UTC
OKAY. WAIT. /breathes in and then breathes out/ jfc.
THIS IS THE PART WHERE I CURSE MY INABILITY TO PUT FEELINGS INTO WORDS ELOQUENTLY. OKAY WHERE DO I START?????
LET'S START WITH QUOTING OKAY bear with me pls

'Death is a universal goal to each of us. It’s the end of our performance. We take a bow and go out with a bang. But that’s not what we are here for in the end.' --> idk I just really really loved this? Like it's pessimistic, but it sounds SO right.

“I’m glad it’s her,” he says. “I’m glad he fell in love with her.” But Baekhyun doesn’t really look like he means what he is saying. It’s funny, how we decorate heartbreaks. --> my heart clenched here srsly. I had to exhale and inhale deeply before continuing.

FROM THE START OF THIS: "Have you ever felt like dying? Like killing yourself," Kai asks when they reach his neighborhood. TO THIS: "In truth, there is no one else but you." --> UGH I WISH I WAS ELOQUENT I WISH I WAS. THAT DIALOGUE WAS JUST VERY VERY BEAUTIFUL!

'He feels childish, like he is twelve again, inside his old ( ... )

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soopremo January 15 2015, 19:43:08 UTC
Ohmygod I'll wait until the reveals so I can put up a more logical comment on your personal journal! This was such a read. Thank you for writing and sharing this <3 I loved it!

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baekmebacon January 20 2015, 14:45:57 UTC
I have a lot of feelings while reading this fic and eibyo;wgyiVAYFGT:KAEGBhbs;hkbjlskrbh i am so incoherent while reading it and ierby;joGBSEIPYBJ SRLjybry it's just sooooOoOo good!

“Excuse me, Miss?” Kyungsoo shivers and then walks to the counter and shows her the Polaroid.

“Have you seen this boy?”

he's going to start all over again in another place and oh my god poor kyungsoo.... NO POOR JONGIN BCS KYUNGSOO LOVED THE HARDWORKING HIM. KYUNGSOO LOVED KAI AND NOT JONGIN WHICH IS SAD.

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