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Nobody's Listening

Sep 30, 2008 16:56

Title: Nobody's listening

Author: 3rd_Leg

Pairing: J2

Disclaimer: When you wish upon a star, make sure its actually a star, not some airplane flying overhead.

Rating: PG-14 (Language primarily)

Word Count: ~3000

Summary: Part 5 of the Deaf!Jared verse. This is based on the prompt by kuhekabir that plainly put entailed Jared getting hurt by Jensen, and ( Read more... )

deaf!jared

Comments 37

oftensleepless October 1 2008, 00:51:12 UTC

So good. No one is perfect, it was hard watching Jensen be so inconsiderate, but just right too. (And maybe Jensen wasn't entirely clueless, maybe he was aiming some of his anger at the person he loves most?).

The make up at the end was lovely.

3rd_leg October 1 2008, 04:28:58 UTC

Yeah, I kind of thought about writing another one where Jensen kind of snaps under the pressure, but I'd feel bad if I made him an asshole lol 'cause I wouldn't want him to come across that way.

I'm glad you enjoyed the story! Thanks so much for reading.

jellicle October 1 2008, 01:10:09 UTC

I'm all teary eyed here, that's what you do to me when you write in this verse. You make me cry.

3rd_leg October 1 2008, 04:29:48 UTC

Awwww *Gives you a hug and sends you some tissue* I'm seriously feeling bad that I make people cry....so not my intent!

Thank you so much for reading!

dairwendan October 1 2008, 01:48:29 UTC

I LOVE the tone in this!

Jared's confusion, and Jensen forgetting and just having fun, topped by the injury - it was perfect!

3rd_leg October 1 2008, 04:30:41 UTC

Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading! And yeah, I dunno why maybe cause I'm a bit rusty with this verse, my brain kept telling me I was getting it wrong....lol writers are so self conscious sometimes!

paleogymnast October 1 2008, 02:19:47 UTC

I loved this (I always love this verse, but I especially love this). Normally I would run away from a Jensen hurts Jared plotline, but this one fit naturally, perfectly and really worked with the characters you've created in this 'verse. Plus the making up for it at the end was spot on and really touching and sweet. Brava!! :)

3rd_leg October 1 2008, 04:33:02 UTC

Thank you. I kind of had it in my head what I wanted to do in this installment, but for the life of me when I wrote it all out, thought I was off the mark.

I'm glad that you found it spot on. *wipes forehead* Whew...

Thanks so much for reading! I'm glad you enjoy this verse!

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3rd_leg October 1 2008, 04:33:23 UTC

Will do my best! lol Thanks for reading!