Comments | 3star4life: A Morning With No Sleep

3star4life

A Morning With No Sleep

Dec 12, 2011 00:48

Pairing: DooWoon
Fandom: B2ST
Rating: NC-17

A/N this is my very first shot at a fanfic...and of course it will be my OTP! I hope you all will like it! *bow*

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rating: nc-17, fandom: b2st, pairing: doowoon, genre: songfic

Comments 13

leggymimi December 12 2011, 11:45:42 UTC

Oh god.

I'll be right fucking back.

3star4life December 12 2011, 22:10:53 UTC

LOL no prob. =)

leggymimi December 14 2011, 01:41:11 UTC

bb, first of fucking all: THANK GOD. DOOWOON. You don’t know the gravity of what you have just done. Actually, I’m sure you do. Yeah, you do. Because your love for doowoon is the same as mine if not more. And the need to write them fucking is just……… it is needed. And you wrote it. And I am so happy. Like, I saw when you posted this at two in the morning or whenever the fuck it was... I was in bed. I nearly flipped when I saw it tagged "nc-17" -- and I read it and was all fdjjdjadjgfkfdgjkajkghfgreufkjgldfgalggjjjjksssssssss. You do not know how great you made my morning. You will never know.

Second of fucking all: Brilliant song choice. Because it matches poor little Woonie’s predicament. Because Doojoon has that ass whipped. WHIPPED. It is absolutely perfect for Dongwoon because, well, I mean, look: Dongwoon waiting like a little puppy for his master to come home in the wee hours of the morning? In a dress shirt -- DOOJOON’S DRESS SHIRT -- and nothing else, but socks ( ... )

OMG!! 3star4life December 14 2011, 22:24:27 UTC

thank you so much!!!!!! Your comment made my day!! ^^

and I understand exactly what you mean!!!!DOOWOON IS.... AHH lol

and he is a little puppy!!!he's just so adorable & babyish & squishy!!!!!!! XD AHHHHHH asdklfjlkjkjajlflk

I hope I can continue making more fics and i'll consider working on that bathroom ;) lol

but thank you so much though!!!! hehe when i first heard this song i already started to imagine Dongwoon O_O i couldn't really explain to people why i was smiling liek an idiot lol =)

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Re: Nice fic~ 3star4life December 12 2011, 22:09:15 UTC

Thank you very much!! ^^

xsangweix December 18 2011, 17:51:11 UTC

^.^ <3333333333333333333333333333
*enough said*:D

3star4life December 19 2011, 03:16:19 UTC

thank you so much!! i appreciate you taking time to comment =)

xsangweix December 19 2011, 13:30:41 UTC

No problem! I really hope to read more from you :D Doowoon is my OTP lol Do you mind if I add you as a friend?

3star4life December 20 2011, 05:01:30 UTC

no problem at all! i was planning on adding ou anyways! XD and i will try to write more and yes! DooWoon is my OTP too!! ^_^

leejaehwa7 January 8 2012, 01:01:24 UTC

Look what I found ( ... )

3star4life January 8 2012, 01:15:50 UTC

OMG MORE DOOWOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! okay let me calm down from the hyper-venitlating [my spelling fail :( ]
Don't worry, I won't tell! I wonder if she'll ever look over this after it's done XD
But thank you so much for reading this! I was planning on writing this fic when I first heard the song but ended up getting lazy

lol I can imagine Yoseob too; he's just so cute & adorable & a ball of energy basically
BEAST's maknae line is just so a;kljkfjalkjflkj XD

What is it with Doojoon and maknaes? o_0 lmao and your welcome if this inspired you in any way

thank yoiu again for reading!!!

cosmoqueen2900 January 16 2012, 06:54:38 UTC

Well cept for a few typos and a couple small errors such as "Doojoon just sat him on Doojoon's lap" instead of on HIS lap that was really really good!! Seriously, and I read a TON of fics and I've run across many sucky ones and this was really good!!! And I applaud you for making your first fic with smut cuz I'd NEVER have the guts to do that! LOL Keep it up girl! :D

3star4life January 16 2012, 19:37:58 UTC

lol thank you very much for reading!! ^__^