Comfortability

[3star4life]

Title: Comfortability
Author: 3star4life
Pairing: DooWoon
Rating: R
Summary: Doojoon finds his comfort.

Comments

[3star4life]

Spot to leggymimi!! ^_^

[leggymimi]

[leggymimi]

"Dressed in nothing but Doojoon's thin, white wrinkled shirt and white tube socks, Dongwoon sat on the edge of the bed, one knee pulled up close to his chest while the other dangled to the floor."
^You're trying to kill me. You're trying to fucking murder my ass. Like, what the fuck is that? You described Dongwoon as this...............this fucking........angel.... This beautiful celestial being and I just.... He is a whore without being a whore, you know? YOU KNOW? OAO I'M NOT MAKING ANY SENSE BUT OKAY, YOU KNOW, FUCK IT. I LOVED THAT DESCRIPTION. HE IS A FUCKING CHINA DOLL.

Now before I get all incoherent, I mustmustMUUUUUST say how beautifully CLEAN this whole fic was. :D I mean, you always write clean stuff -- and for that I am envious -- and by "clean" I mean it's straight to the point and not all up in the air and off in tangents -- like me. -v- It's just so easy to follow along with, and your clean style of writing was SUPER for this fic. <3 Alright, now that that's done, that's probably the only coherent thing that'll be in

[leggymimi]

"Doojoon's hand picked up speed, the male underneath him starting to pant and whine. Hovering on top, his eyes remained glued to Dongwoon, his head moving from side to side as he tried to gain control of himself but he couldn't. It was cute, the frustration the boy underneath him expressed. And he couldn't fuckin' stand it. Doojoon knew the exact same part was played out in front of another man and it must have been just as cute; the dark brown orbs glossy with water and need, the soft, pink tulips quivering with pleasure as small moans and mewls blew out of them, the scrunching of that sharp nose noting how hard it is becoming to keep still, the sweaty strands of dirty-blond hair sticking to the forehead."^.___________

[3star4life]

Spot to its_raining!!!!

[its_rayning]

He sat, cigarette in hand, hair messy, pants loose and shirt unbuttoned, as he took another puff and blew the smoke out.
smoking!Doojoon :D GOOD.

He shook it off and kept walking to class, he didn't want his student's to skip his class thinking their professor's absent.
AAAAAH professor!Doojoon

He was so excited to mention the new discoveries he made of archetypes and other literary findings. Doojoon noted the crestfallen state of the younger man and sighed.

Omg literature/english student woon is so cute ;A; I'm creying.

I always cry at giggling Dongwoon bb ;_____; BECAUSE HE DOES THAT AND HIS VOICE IS TOO DEEP AND THEY'RE-
MANLY GIGGLES!!!!!!

[3star4life]

OMG NO! I wrote the wrong 'Rayning' for your spot :O I am so sorry BB! Never again!

But BB thank you so much!! I had to incorporate two years of AP Eng. in there somehow lol but not too much...i suppose.

OMG his manyly giggles!! AHHHHHHHH! hehe

Thank you again for the comment lovely!!!

[its_rayning]

LOL it's okay XD

Ahhhh yes, I see u__u love of lit comes from AP, ahh.

[3star4life]

spot to madiwi!!

[3star4life]

spot to diahna!!!

[diahna]

T_____________________T I always always aaaaaaaaalways ended up crying like a stupid when I read the sweetness of their confessions ♥ aigoo... Doojoon is killing me being so rude and jealous but so sensitive at the same time T^T I really love these Doowoons! Thanks~~

[3star4life]

No BB don't cry!!! *offers Kleenex*

Thank you so much for commenting!!! Always happy to read your comments =)

[3star4life]

Spot to kiwoon_junwoon!!!