Rating: Swearing and mention of homosexual content Pairing: Eric/Vince Summery: E is not doing well and Vince is the reason why. Author Notes: I am posting at last, thank you for your patience.
Yay update! I'm glad Vince stayed with him. I loved the bit about the swimming at the top, that was a neat way to open this chapter and illustrate just how messed up E really is. I'm anxious for Vince (and us) to get the full story about what happened to E. Oh AND! Why does E know Bob?!
Great chapter! Though now I'm even MORE impatient for the next installment. I'm glad the cookies helped. :D ::gives you a whole cookie factory, but not one that makes those god-awful widely distributed excuses for cookies, one that makes them from scratch and sends them directly...and preferably only employs sweet grandmothers who love nothing more than to bake cookies::
I love that kinda of cookie, except when the grandmother is arthrtic and can't mix the dough throughly but one feels compelled to eat the cookies anyway because she made them. That is no good.
I'm glad that I have managed to engage you in the plot, how E knows Bob will proably be next chapter or the one after, I am currently writing the MASSIVE CONFRONTATION chapter so we'll see.
I liked the swimming part a bunch too but I was worried it was too, much I am so glad to learn it wasn't!!!!!!!!
So good! Keep going. I love the dynamic you're building and how you're not just jumping into sex. Brilliant plot. You make me want to try writing Entourage fics.
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Great chapter! Though now I'm even MORE impatient for the next installment. I'm glad the cookies helped. :D ::gives you a whole cookie factory, but not one that makes those god-awful widely distributed excuses for cookies, one that makes them from scratch and sends them directly...and preferably only employs sweet grandmothers who love nothing more than to bake cookies::
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I'm glad that I have managed to engage you in the plot, how E knows Bob will proably be next chapter or the one after, I am currently writing the MASSIVE CONFRONTATION chapter so we'll see.
I liked the swimming part a bunch too but I was worried it was too, much I am so glad to learn it wasn't!!!!!!!!
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Do you beta at all?
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Yeah I do beta, do you have something you want me to read?
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