Comments | 41551947105: where there's smoke...

41551947105

where there's smoke...

Jul 30, 2012 00:05

...there's fire.

a drabble for dragontory; wherein Youngbae misses Jiyong’s smell and Seunhyun realises he should quit.

PG-13
warnings: graphic smoking, gaygaygaygaaaaay
pairing: GDYB, ToBae

( Youngbae can’t quite believe he’s about to do what he’s about to do, but then he remembers once again the smell of nicotine clinging to Jiyong’s hair, to his breath, to his hands and it’s an addiction on it’s own, even if he’s not quite ready to admit that yet. He tells himself it’s plain curiousity that gets him fumbling with the lighter, and not stupidity or unreckoned sentiment. )

drabbles, gdyb, big bang, tobae, where there is smoke

Comments 12

corpuscallos_m July 29 2012, 23:31:05 UTC

aw this was sad. top makes a move and yb has no tact. poor top. but anyway, I liked it!

41551947105 July 30 2012, 10:59:52 UTC

yeah, top should've known better than to try anyway~

thank you! :)

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41551947105 July 31 2012, 00:46:10 UTC

I try to self-beta oneshots and drabbles, as not to bother someone else with that tedious task. But since english is not my mothertongue there must be mistakes left, sorry! I'll try again later, when my mind is fresh~~

As for the broken-heart mending... get in line. hurr. xD

dragontory August 1 2012, 00:57:28 UTC

Damn it. Reserving a spot before anyone else comments >.> Thank you so much dear.

dragontory August 1 2012, 01:40:52 UTC

Wow, totally unexpected ToBae there (other than the fact you told me hehe).

I like Youngbae's sheepish reactions - because that's just so him isn't it? Straightlaced YB smoking and then Seunghyun's there, full of contradictions, a man-child who is pretty damn ridiculous (in a great way). Yeh, the characterisation in this is cool and the unexpected ToBae :D I can't wait to write my own lol.

41551947105 August 1 2012, 08:33:30 UTC

haha, yeah. I imagine Youngbae a little young and oblivious when it comes to relationships, still at that point where he tries to avoid hurting people. (which he'll soon discover is impossible anyway)

also, no pressure! write it whenever you feel like it, if you still feel like it :P

lawrence_keo August 8 2012, 22:56:10 UTC

Loved it! I am a total GDYB fan but in that one instance I felt like Bae should have went with TABI!

41551947105 August 9 2012, 02:22:14 UTC

hehe, yeah, I always sympathise with the one who gets rejected too. Glad you like it! :)

seamanthedog January 5 2013, 07:23:30 UTC

Well I loved this. I liked how Top knew the reason that Youngbae was smoking and tried a little to make a move. Sad that it failed spectacularly but I loved it all the same.

41551947105 January 5 2013, 21:25:38 UTC

Thanks for the love~ :)