Comments | 4d_artbitch: Let society fuck itself (part 2 of 2)

4d_artbitch

Let society fuck itself (part 2 of 2)

Sep 02, 2011 07:23

Author 4d_artbitch
Rating: PG-15
Pairing: JongKey, ninja!Tofuho (just can't resist my otp xD)
Genre: angst?
Disclaimer: i own key inside my pocket. like, a real key? //pathetic/

( Jonghyun's too distracted to realize there were tiny sobs echoing from the bathroom. Even half an hour later when he's on his way back to his room, he doesn't hear the cries grow louder, defeated, unstopping )

pairing: onew/minho, pairing: key/jonghyun, fanfic: shinee, rating: pg-15

Comments 35

ontaejongminkey September 2 2011, 00:46:57 UTC

ninja hug!

ontaejongminkey September 2 2011, 00:55:56 UTC

Ohohoho~
My ninja skills are activated! XD

Ugh, I love how this ended!
Very good Dhani^^ *hugs*

Now, let's party for your very first JongKey stint!
*dances wildly*

4d_artbitch September 2 2011, 01:16:06 UTC

hoah youuuuuuuu your awesome skills are back! *throws confeti*

thankyou Judy :)
but writing angst is so hard for me. i think i will back into crack ;A; lololol why why

yes let's party bb! *drinks soju* fufufu

ontaejongminkey September 2 2011, 01:21:44 UTC

Woohoo! my ninja skills are indeed back! XD

Angst is my favorite genre :3

C'mon! Partyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy~

PS. you're super pretty y'know :') I saw your pics at fb! I wanna pinch your cheeks! *pinchy pinch*

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live_shop_die28 September 2 2011, 01:58:09 UTC

Oh my! I loved this, and JongKey is not even my fav! ++++ You write beautifully!

4d_artbitch September 2 2011, 02:20:33 UTC

Aww thank you so much bb :) *bows*
what's your otp then?^^

haha nuu my original draft is actually a mess. That's the beta who made this beautiful.

live_shop_die28 September 2 2011, 02:30:46 UTC

Haha I should get one of those! a beta I mean lol. I just started writing three days ago lol! Please overlook my fansqueals and excitement.

I love JongKey, don't get me wrong, but OnKey is my OTP. I am Key centric, so I will take it all.

4d_artbitch September 2 2011, 03:30:23 UTC

I haven't written lot of fics too T^T. I'm a newbie....*sighs*

Oh oh onkey~ they're cute :3

You can look for beta at shinee_replay, they're awsome! And they can help us with the plot too^^

sunlit September 2 2011, 02:37:29 UTC

uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu hai bb-ah! ;u; ♥

yay i'm glad you decided to put this up; it's a lovely, heartwarming story. c: (a-and i'm glad i got to see it firsthand too!) you're more than welcome, and nuuuuu i have no part in making this beautiful - the story and characters and plotline were yours to start off with anyway! *u* thank you for giving me the opportunity to beta, and feel free to send me more of your work in the future! ♥

4d_artbitch September 2 2011, 04:00:31 UTC

Uuuu noo, you helped a lot. thanks for that chelsea bb <3

glad you don't mind if i'm bothering you again >w< *snuggles*
It's fun disscussing the fics thingy with you! :)

sunlit September 2 2011, 04:36:48 UTC

you're more than welcome c:

nuuuuu of course i won't! /snuggles with you ♥ i found the entire experience fun as well, and i'd love to beta again! ;u;

melalocket September 2 2011, 03:36:33 UTC

i love this !
its beautiful yet sad :'(

4d_artbitch September 2 2011, 03:41:13 UTC

Thanks hun. <3
Don't cry! *wipes the tears* xDD

chibiyoko September 2 2011, 06:44:04 UTC

And number 16 made me smile like a moron. You fucking idiot Kim Jonghyun. :D Oh~

4d_artbitch September 2 2011, 06:53:53 UTC

D'oh. I'm smiling with you :)
Yes that handsome idiot xD.

thanks for commenting <3