[one shot] Taking a baby step

Oct 25, 2011 22:42

Title: Taking a baby step
Author:4d_artbitch
Genre: fluff fluffy fluff, angst.
Pairing: tofuho, ninja!jongkey
Warnings: betaed by ZE SHIM RAEMI look i write your full name lols aka candiiez
dongsaeng. thankyou so much my baby taeminie :3
wc: 3889.

For days, Jinki follows close behind him, marvels in awe at everything like a puppy. )

pairing: onew/minho, pairing: key/jonghyun, fanfic: shinee, rating: pg-15, oneshot

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4d_artbitch November 25 2011, 13:38:07 UTC
YOURS BB ♥
lol ninja

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4d_artbitch November 29 2011, 01:30:43 UTC
....i haven't been checking my inbox for a while. i didn't know you replied this xDD

THANKYOU BB. thanks for reading :)

and i'm loling at the onew gif. hyper!Onew is adorkable x))))))

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geenkey November 26 2011, 13:55:53 UTC
holy shit this is sooooooo freaking AWESOME...
DAEBAK!!! DAEBAK!!

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4d_artbitch November 26 2011, 14:25:13 UTC
Eeeep THANK YOU SO MUCH! ;A; <33
/gives you Kibummie's cookies.

i thought no one has read this xDD

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dabadubu08 November 27 2011, 09:55:11 UTC
LOLOLOLOL JINKI IS AWESOME!!
I don't think I can quote jinki's awesomeness here. really. it's too much that I might copy the whole fic to this comment box *slapped*

ps: i got some bruises on my arms, will minho give me a kiss too? XD

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4d_artbitch November 29 2011, 01:37:43 UTC
wheeeee, thanks for reading dongsaeng! ^3^ /hugs

and no you can't. you need beyond THIS clumsy to call away Minho's attention from Jinki xDDDD


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black_wind123 November 28 2011, 18:22:32 UTC
Aww this is so adorable :3 I especially liked the whole kiss scene. You did a very good job bb <3

Jojo loves this :D <3

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4d_artbitch November 29 2011, 01:46:10 UTC
omg thanks for dropping by Jojo-yah! ♥♥ /hugs.
that was my fav line to :) and i'm secretly hoping they accidentaly filmed that scene in their new hallo baby or something lol

oh anyway. minho will join WGM paired with hyunA next year, right.
i just idek oh how about jinki D''':


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black_wind123 November 30 2011, 12:32:38 UTC
*hugs you back*

LOL I wish they did that too XD

OMG I heard that they're one of the rumoured couples and I was like O.O HyunA and Minho...hmmm....Idk. :/ Let's wait and see is all I can say. Minho is a man now... *sigh* *sigh*

And as for Jinki, he'll be like the most sweetest husband ever *.*

Too bad he's already married to Key XP

Yeah, that's right Key. Jinki's all yours ;) (sorry, i'm too onkey biased OTL)

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4d_artbitch December 2 2011, 12:09:27 UTC
yes minho is a man now #sigggggghhh.

wheee, couldn't agree more about it! :) (i'm curently re-watching episodes of onew star night whereas onew is the maknae there and his hyung's talking about how too kind he is, plus the possibility of onew's gf and i couldn't help but think OOOH TOFUHO or JONGYU and ooo maybe ONKEY so yaoi minded lol forgive me

LOLing hard at the last picture :)))))))))

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OMG TOFUHO SPOOOOOOOOT♥ candiiez December 9 2011, 02:41:06 UTC
DAMN GURL HOW CAN YOU POST A TOFUHO SHOT AND FORGET TO SPOT ME HERE ? WAE ? WAE WAE WAE WAEEE ?
Okay I admit I read a little before putting this comment so... TYPOS !

“Come on Jinki, let’s get some snacks”
“I’m on a diet, hyung. Let’s just leave” Jinki puffs his cheeck.

So, since when is Jonghyun older than Jinki ? Okay, I kno Jinki looks ike a baby, but, c'mon~

(oh and, is the red haired guy singing to his foor taem'ppa ? dunno, just asking~)

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Re: OMG TOFUHO SPOOOOOOOOT♥ candiiez December 9 2011, 03:04:11 UTC
Ah. Just read the other half of Number 1. Jonghyun didnt know that Jinki was older.. aish, what an idiot.

GOSH THAT WAS SO KYEOPTA!!
TOFUHO IS SOO JJANG DAMNNN ICOULD GET NOSEBLEED JUST READING THAT..♥

(omg eonni you made so much typos i gave up after the tenth typo i spotted. xDD)

it was really adorable~
(and hell yea i like Jinki !)

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Re: OMG TOFUHO SPOOOOOOOOT♥ 4d_artbitch December 9 2011, 03:08:41 UTC
LOL SORYYYYYY. i know you hate typos so this fic is totally will make you cringe hahaha.
you can fix my typos and i will edit it.i'm too lazy to re-read what i've done write -_- /bricked

ah, thanks for dropping by, dear :) ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

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Re: OMG TOFUHO SPOOOOOOOOT♥ candiiez December 9 2011, 18:17:54 UTC
Hehe, you're starting to know me well xD
(lol yes i was cringing during my lecture. i dunno, it really just bugs me.)

Ya, eonni, you know you just gave me a good idea there.
I have no school today and way too much free time for someone as restrained and baby-ed by her mother like me(she doesnt want me to go out alone... /sulks). So, yes, I'll correct the typos I spot.

Because I have nothing to do with my life.

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