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Wild intentions 1/..

Apr 27, 2013 01:16

Author: 4everxd or Cutie Angel
Disclaimer: I don’t own them but I wish I did.
Pairing: Yunjae
Genre: Romance, Humor
Rating: PG-15(for now)
Summary: Jaejoong needed to start working out again and who is the best person to help him other than Jung Yunho?
Chapter 1

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dbsk, fanfic, chapter 1, wild intentions, yunjae

Comments 4

Yunjae xchiyochan April 26 2013, 23:28:45 UTC

Omg I loved this poor joongie calling him fat xD please update soon!!!

Re: Yunjae 4everxd April 26 2013, 23:40:13 UTC

Changmin was just being mean, just to make him go to the gym so he and Yunho could meet. Believe me you will thank him later ;) Thanks for reading :D I will update as soon as I can ^^

hattukissa April 27 2013, 14:10:52 UTC

This reminds me so much of the scene in Dangerous Love where Yunho and Jae go to the gym!! XD You know what, humor is a really difficult genre to write (I've tried that and failed miserably D:) but I think you did a really good job! I had a grin on my face the entire time XD especially at the start when Jaejoong thought about his dongsaengs.. God, I wouldn't mind Jaejoong's ass a bit rounder than it is, the guy needs to eat for God's sake! XD though I do miss the muscles ( ... )

4everxd April 27 2013, 14:34:08 UTC

Oh my god your comment <3 Gurl~ you know me too well. That's what inspired me :D I did good with humor genre, that's nice! thank god xD True what you said about Jaejoong I totally agree, but here the things are different :P Of course, Jaejoong would fit well in here LOL me too Yunho in the gym is such a sexy image >w< Yep the others want them together :3 Yunho couldn't resist looking at Jae's ass xD UGH yes cutie Jaejoong is the key here! I know it's short(it's a little difficult to write more yet) but I will try to make it longer! :) OMG stop it! you know my thoughts! You will see ;)
Well I am still new to writing so you can expect here and there but I will try harder! ^^ The next part hmm I will write it today and post it today or tommorow, but I also have another fic I am writing which is a one-shot and it's gonna be really cool and I may post too! :D
Thank you for writing such a sweet comment! <3 It was helpful and it will make me better for sure :) I will update as soon as I can~ <3