Just a doll

[4everxd]

Title: Just a doll
Author: 4everxd
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: PG
Genre: AU, Sci Fi, Angst
Summary: He was just a doll, another pretty mannequin decorating the stores. But here is the point when a young man is wrong, because this doll is special. Drabble(510 words)

Comments

[hattukissa]

Omg, was Jaejoong the doll alive!? O__O I like the idea very much.. You could do so much with that~ and I have to say you've gotten much better at writing since the last story I read from you! The flow of the story got much better and more fluent if you see what I mean :3 I didn't notice any mistakes either!!

Jae definitely could be a doll he's so pretty it's unreal ;;__;; so maybe Jae the lovebot can cure Yunho's poor broken heart~ Maybe he's actually a boy that's only put under a spell or something?? I want to know ;^; (why did I suddenly have a mental image of Yunho undressing doll!Jae slowly and hhdgggjhnh ugh ;^; why did my brain jump right on to sex XD)
I'm sorry to hear you had a bad day, I hope you will cheer up soon! Vasia fighting! btw, why was your account suspended in the first place I wonder O-O

[4everxd]

YAAAY comment from you~ ;3; I am so happy <3 Yes, Jaejoongie is alive, maybe ;)? Well tbh I haven't thought of a storyline...I just wrote down this based on the picture and the feels it gave me :D I am glad you think I am better, it's good to hear that I pleased my favorite author :) LOL my writing is based on what I write but yes I feel like it got better too :3

I agree with you, Jaejoong is so so pretty <3 Yes, he will cure Yunho's heart that's the point ;D hahaha you naughty girl~ straight to the sexy times~ /thinks of possible smut/ HMMMM you give me ideas hohoho~ ;3

Well I had a bad day because my first account got suspended and I didn't know why, then I made a new one and it got suspended after I posted a picture...maybe someone reported me or smth IDK :/ Thank God, I managed to retrieve my old account~ ;; and I am sick too OTL I feel better already, thank you~ <3 You're so kind to me~ <3<3<3<3 ILU <3

[yunjaelicious]

I'm a barbie girl in my barbie world~
You can brush my hair undress me everywhere~
*wiggles eyebrows*
Hahaha Sorry I just had this song in my head reading this! Jae is really so pretty like a beautiful doll! He is almost unreal *___*
God you should write a story based on this or a sequel cause you can do so much with this storyline!!
I'm sure they both got happy with each other!

Fuuuu Vasia open ending again T_____T i hate but i lube you! Write moaarr~
You really get better with each story! <3

[4everxd]

Hahaha I read your mind sending you the song LMAO :P Jaejoong is a pretty Barbie~ ;3 LOL all I was thinking when I was writing this was sad and angst things~ XD I know this storyline is good, I will see what I can do ^^ They will happy, but believe me I won't make it easy one them XD I like OPEN endings, ok? I just want to stop and leave the imagination to flow~ I lube you too bb <3 Really? Thank you!!! <3<3 I am glad you liked it ^w^

[smartcatt]

Oh I really like where this is going! It sounds like it could be such an interesting story!
If you need help with a bit of editing, I can be of service ☆～（ゝ。∂）
Though my editing skillzz aren't of the best sort ^^;
BUT I LIKE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[4everxd]

I am glad you like this ^w^ Getting a comment from you is awesomeeee <3<3 I wil try to make this a chaptered story one day XD Awww thank you dear *___* <3 If I need to edit something, I will ask you then~ <3 I am sure your editing is just fine ;)

[tardiskeeper]

Looks like this doll has more life in him than meets the eye. Very interesting story will keep an eye on it.
Thank you!

[4everxd]

Yes, yes~ :3 I will try to make a chaptered story of this one day~ we will see :) Thanks for reading dear ^^ <3

[meepnbeep]

Need More (/ O wO)\
Please take home jaebot yunho! and do XXXX and XXXX XXX, maybe use some XXX or have XXXX between the two #_#

[4everxd]

I will try to write more when I have time~ Seems like everyone likes this idea~ :D Hahah don't worry~ they will <3 Thanks for reading ^^ <3