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4ft2nat_nat

that beautiful tree

Mar 25, 2005 00:45

That beautiful tree

That bears guilt for me

It cheers my broken heart,

And dries my miserable doubts.

For in that tree rests all my hope.

That tree lifts my head.

When all around me is dreary,

It offers light to my feet

And refuge to my wondering soul.

That tree’s beauty is often overlooked;

For it is stained,

Stained with the glorious blood of ( Read more... )

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hey anonymous March 26 2005, 05:08:22 UTC

just want you to know that i think thats a nice poem and touching to some i also think you should contiue writing them.i have a question is that what you wanna to become (writer) or is that just a hobbie?

Re: hey 4ft2nat_nat March 26 2005, 15:30:15 UTC

Thanks so much for the compliment. I really appreciate it. I am a little self conscience about my poems. I am glad someone was touched by it. I haven't decided what I want to be yet, so I guess writing is just a hobby. I express my feelings better when I write, it is sort of a way to vent for me. But,I don't think I am good enough to be a "professional" writer. But I will continue to write them. Thanks again!