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Jan 09, 2005 17:29

Dear closest friends n well other readers of my life ( Read more... )

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pass_the_lemons January 9 2005, 21:16:52 UTC
That was deep, i'm proud of my little poet!! You've grown up so well!!!!!

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brokenglass96 January 11 2005, 08:42:00 UTC
How can you make someone see hat you want, when theyre only intent is to not see just that?
How can you make someone stop and think about what you're telling them if they havent heard a word you've just said?
How can you say what you mean , when all they think you mean is they're at fault?
Why do we all feel so sorry for ourselves, when all we need to realize its not about you or I its about completing the mission?
WHo needs these thoughts to ponder, when everyone alway says theyve had enough?
who will listen to your contemplations and sorrows when all they're thinking is how theyre life is so tough?
WHere is guidance in our sorrow? the time we need it most

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brokenglass96 January 11 2005, 08:52:56 UTC
the title for your peom is Hopeless Pondering, it has no hope ......its is like falling......down down down into the darkest depths of some unimaginable horror and sorrow and guilt.

' Who is here left to ponder, who is here left to calm my troubled seas and draw me forth into the basking raidience of the light so vacant from my mind with these heavy thoughts that now blow away like leaves in a gentle wind to trouble me nevermore.'

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brokenglass96 January 11 2005, 08:57:38 UTC
there is god and with his hand he will bring forth your hope and strength that we all know resides in you , and you will overcome this you will carry on and leave those who would pull you down to weep in agony of their own hellish contemplation. For they do not wish to be saved, for shame or grief sorrow or wrath slader murder or anger, whatever crimes keep them chained in the dark dungeons of theyre lives. Someday they may fly with the rest of us basking in the effervescence and magnificance of the light, drinking it in as water to quench their captivity.

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brokenglass96 January 11 2005, 10:47:16 UTC
but today is not that day. not today .

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