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what happened before the sudden stop (Mark/Eduardo, TSN)

Nov 22, 2010 03:08

Title: what happened before the sudden stop
Author: 4rightchords_
Notes: Written for seashadows' prompt over at the mark_eduardo ficathon: "Mark/Eduardo, always-a-girl!Eduardo. Mark lusts over his coolly elegant best friend, and fantasizes about what he's going to do once he gets her out of those button-down shirts and pencil skirts. And then does it." Guys, I don't even know ( Read more... )

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twincy November 22 2010, 12:04:41 UTC

I had no idea I wanted to read this until I did. Also: final paragraph gut-punch, well done.

4rightchords_ November 22 2010, 15:44:59 UTC

I had no idea I wanted to write it until I did, so we are in the same boat there! I'm glad you liked it =)

tafidadarling November 22 2010, 13:47:21 UTC

I cannot help but imagine Andrew from Imaginarium. You know the scene?!?! What is wrong with me? XD

I don't usually do the gender reversal thing, but girl!Eduardo who is sexy and confident rocks!

Loved this. ♥

4rightchords_ November 22 2010, 15:45:56 UTC

lol, I don't know the scene. You should link me to screencaps =D I don't usually do genderswap either, but for some reason I saw this prompt and was intrigued. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

tafidadarling November 22 2010, 16:35:02 UTC

Oh God. I must do that then.

( ... )

4rightchords_ November 22 2010, 16:54:25 UTC

LOL. Okay, not QUITE what I was going for. But he's so cute!

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seashadows November 22 2010, 17:16:19 UTC

Holy crap, passed out from the hot. YOUR FAULT! :D But seriously, incredible characterization and I'm not sure who I want to be more...

Favorite bits: the one where Mark is thinking about fucking her shoe (LOL!), denting the wall with his head, awkward!Mark in general, Edi kind of looking like me only probably thin. :D And better-looking.

4rightchords_ November 22 2010, 17:19:36 UTC

I am so glad you like it! Especially the shoe part. I giggled while writing the shoe part. FOR YOUR REFERENCE the shoes in question are these. They are the least comfortable shoes in the world and physically impossible to walk in (and I say this as someone with a large collection of four-to-five-inch heels that I wear regularly), but fffffff they are gorgeous. I returned them with a tear in my eye.

ANYWAY. I am glad it pleased you. And gurl, if you look anything like the Edi in my head then I am sure you are a sex bomb.

slashyelizabeth November 22 2010, 17:31:50 UTC

I am DEAD. But what a nice cause of death! Seriously, this was outrageously hot.

she is so warm and so wet and how is this his life

FLAIL

I've been trying to answer this prompt and now I see I have some really big high heels to fill...

4rightchords_ November 22 2010, 17:33:39 UTC

ahahahahaha, I am so glad you like it! Given the amount of energy I spend fawning over your zombieland fic (hint: it is a lot of energy) I am delighted that you like what I write.

I'm excited to read your fill!

slashyelizabeth November 22 2010, 17:59:26 UTC

Mutual fawning society! Honestly, this was AWESOME. My fill will be up tomorrow or Wednesday. I have way too many fics going at once!

4rightchords_ November 22 2010, 17:59:47 UTC

hahahaha, your life is awesome

learnthemusic November 22 2010, 20:45:16 UTC

I'm pretty much all FLAIL about this too because I had no idea I wanted to read girl!Eduardo fic or the like but now I'm just getting ~ideas~. This was so fantastic. I laughed aloud several times - dick in her pump, ahahahahaha. Also, yes, wonderful ending! Guh. I'm all over the place!

4rightchords_ November 22 2010, 20:53:59 UTC

yay, thanks! =D seashadows and I were discussing the possibility of alwaysagirl!Mark and alwaysagirl!Eduardo femslash =X but idk.