These are too lovely! You have such a strong voice and such a clear style. I really hope you have plans to do this professionally in some capacity or another?
There are so many places that I could copy and quote to you, to point out what I loved about this. I like the way you mix short, punctuating sentences with long, more languid ones. A lot of writers tend to one extreme or the other, but you find this gorgeous medium in the middle that pulls your reader through. Just beautiful work, as always. ^__^
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There are so many places that I could copy and quote to you, to point out what I loved about this. I like the way you mix short, punctuating sentences with long, more languid ones. A lot of writers tend to one extreme or the other, but you find this gorgeous medium in the middle that pulls your reader through. Just beautiful work, as always. ^__^
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