"Broken Hearts and Mending String" [Past Times] [Naruto: Tenten] [049 - Stage]

[notesonlove]

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She had been loitering on a bench in the park, the sounds of Tokyo distant as night hung heavily overhead.  She couldn’t see stars here.  She threw her arms around the edge of the back, her fingers curling into the wood, staring intently at the sky as if there were fireworks bursting overhead.  The lone waning crescent was obscured by the trees

Comments

[passivesky]

Beautiful, that's all there is to it. I was completely wrapped up in this and felt a little warm feeling in my chest when I finished. As usual, I was not only blown away, but also struck dead by the quality. I came across this by accident and realized that you were the same notesonlife in ff.net. I was so happy to have found one of my favorite authors on livejournal.

Amazing job,
passivesky (aka Fire Halo)

[notesonlove]

aw thanks so much! :] <3'
I'm really glad you enjoyed it, and I'm quite flattered.
haha, yeah, I was going to use notesonlife here too... but it was already taken. :\

[mm_kokopelli]

Awww.

It was just so...awesome. I love stories about bands (possibly because I reallyreallyreally like rock music) and it was a beautiful piece, with brilliant pacing and made of awesome win-ness. Very well done. Kudos.