[Past Times] [Naruto: KibaIno AU] "Worth The Aggravation"

Dec 16, 2007 14:14

Title: Worth The Aggravation
Author: wordynessiePrompt: City ( Read more... )

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wordynessie December 16 2007, 21:07:02 UTC
Oh thanks! And sorry, I'm usually pretty good at remembering to tag.

I'm glad you liked this story and that you've read the others. There's very little commenting on this community, but I still enjoy the challenge nonetheless. Thanks for your kind words!

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lilacfield December 17 2007, 03:26:51 UTC
I enjoyed reading this. The only thing I want to point out is that Ino's attraction to Kiba feels rather abrupt, like there's a transitional paragraph missing. Other than that, it was fun.

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wordynessie December 17 2007, 04:11:21 UTC
Thanks for the advice! And I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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