Oh thanks! And sorry, I'm usually pretty good at remembering to tag.
I'm glad you liked this story and that you've read the others. There's very little commenting on this community, but I still enjoy the challenge nonetheless. Thanks for your kind words!
I enjoyed reading this. The only thing I want to point out is that Ino's attraction to Kiba feels rather abrupt, like there's a transitional paragraph missing. Other than that, it was fun.
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I'm glad you liked this story and that you've read the others. There's very little commenting on this community, but I still enjoy the challenge nonetheless. Thanks for your kind words!
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