five different languages part 2

[52016y]

”You really shouldn’t have kissed Jaejoong yesterday.”

”I know, but-but I was drunk and I, I didn’t think straight, you know how I am when I’m drunk, right?”

A scoff.

”I know, but you still shouldn’t have. Jaejoong’s starting his ‘hey-let’s-get-over-Yunho!’ -process and I don’t want others to make it more painful for him than it already is.”

A

Comments

[aeri__iijiri]

i loved this ♥
there is so much agony, jealousy, selfishness, and love going on here that it makes my heart bleed a lot D:
i think yoochun is finally realizing for sure about junsu, and yunho too.
poor jaejoong, but at least minnie is there for him to be his very good friend ♥

[52016y]

I'm glad that you liked this~! ♥

I'm sorry for making your heart bleed 8DD!
Minnie really is awesome, isn't he?

Thanks for reading and commenting---! I really appreciate it ♥

[dapdaphae]

I WANT MOAR.

I loved the whole break-up/after break-up dialogue btwn the Yunho&gf, Yunho&Jae---was very realistic, and I love how you kept them in character *o* When Yunho slept over at Jae's... it felt like something sparked inside himself, and good gods woman, you should explore that spark moooooooooaaarr!

The ending (oh, I don't even want to think that this is the end) was satisfying, almost OT5-ish in their comfort level, but the yunjae and yoosu was still very much there. Oh min~ah, come model for me for a while and leave your hyungs to themselves~

fabulous, fabulous, fabulous.

Did I mention I want another sequel? XD

cheers ♥

[52016y]

8DDD MOAR WILL COME! Maybe.. some day!

I really tried to keep it realistic (I myself think that I failed a bit :'< I couldn't write it the way I wanted) but I'm not that good with writing about things I haven't experienced / don't know about... so some parts in the fic came out a bit messy. 8D

THE SPARK SHOULD BE EXPLORED! But--- sometime later >XD!

And the sequel of this sequel will come... in time! :D:D:D!
thanks for reading and the comment! ♥

[jakiwumi]

Yah....sequel is here ^_^

A silly clueless Yunho really gets on my nerve but somehow i like it..
this chap is more realistic to me and i like it this way :)
the part i like the most was when Yunho stayed over at JJ's place w/o sex.. he should feel something ne?

And can i hope for more shots to come from this??? (*_^)

[52016y]

Well, you can always hope for more shots of this! 8D I'm thinking of doing another sequel, but dunno when I'll start working on it~

This fic seemed a bit more realistic to me too, but still somewhat-- messy XD

Thanks for commenting and reading o/! ♥

[xiao_tian_jelly]

Since I am hooked to your story, I wish more time for you to write the third, fourth, fifth...and so on chapters :)

[52016y]

I'll see what I can do! 8D Hopefully school won't totally pwn me : (

Again, I'm glad you liked it~! (or well.. are hooked to it? :D) ♥

[munchycocoa]

yay!! you updated! <333

when are you going to make yunho realize his feeling for jae? >.o
i hope you'll be writing the continuation for this :DDD

[52016y]

Yunho is kind of thick-headed and just... doesn't get it XD

I'll start when I get time /and/ inspiration! o/
I'm happy that you like it~ ♥ :D