Comments | 55blank55: written, partly as an apology and mostly as an epiphany/confession....

55blank55

written, partly as an apology and mostly as an epiphany/confession....

Jun 30, 2006 02:31

"Promise"
A lonely spire, standing tall
my beating heart should cause its fall.
As memry wakes, revelation quakes
and through the mist, I see the fog.
My lifes been broke, not just once
I fear not last, though not upfront.
Her loves been there, ripe for the taking
but I'm a fool and not worth staking.
Shes always cared, I've been scared
but now I'm free and ( Read more... )

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velcro_panda June 30 2006, 07:20:28 UTC

Blink 18 & your poems make me smile.
:]

Everything has fallen to pieces, Earth is dying help me jesus.... 55blank55 June 30 2006, 18:03:35 UTC

I dont really like this one much...but i wrote it for somebody and its really up to her....

Re: Everything has fallen to pieces, Earth is dying help me jesus.... 55blank55 June 30 2006, 18:06:26 UTC

well, i like the last couple lines.....

Re: Everything has fallen to pieces, Earth is dying help me jesus.... velcro_panda July 14 2006, 20:22:34 UTC

Alot of decisions that mean something to us seem to be left up to other people.

Hah. I hope that made sense.

sporks_rock June 30 2006, 17:14:48 UTC

I must say, that is quite amazing!
Mush like yourself. =]

sporks_rock June 30 2006, 17:15:23 UTC

*cough*
*much.
(wtf where that that fucking 's' come from?!)

Drown the youth with useless warnings, teenage rules, they're fucked and boring.... 55blank55 June 30 2006, 18:05:22 UTC

I'm no more amazing than the thousands of rabbits being pulled out of the millions of hats throughout society =)

Re: Drown the youth with useless warnings, teenage rules, they're fucked and boring.... sporks_rock June 30 2006, 19:06:24 UTC

hah, you're an odd one.
But I believe we've already established that..

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